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Essence
Essence
What words do I tell you
what phrase shall I use
To convey all my feelings
and the depth of them too
Each line that I write
each word that I choose
Just isn't enough
to explain it to you
How far the horizon
how blue is the sea
How long is forever
am I really me
Will the sun always shine
and the stars twinkle too
How can I tell you
how much I love you
You're my first thought each morning
as I rise from my bed
You're my last thought each evening
as I lay down my head
As I go through my day
it's your face that I see
If a song fills my heart
it's a song you gave me
So, how do I tell you
can I make your heart soar
Can I somehow convince you
I've never felt this before
You and me, we're not children
and we both know our minds
I want to love you forever
till the end of all time
How long is forever
does anyone know
Above and beyond
infinite.....maybe so
You, you're the teacher
so school me on this
Tell me how long
we share in this bliss
Tell me, yes, tell me
what future you see
Through all of our lifetimes
together we'll be
For you are within me
you've captured my soul
The essence of Sue
for you only....you know.
Sue
Critiques
raskin
16 years 4 months ago
Good one
jetz
16 years 4 months ago
Hi Raskin,
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
It’s undiluted and pure.
jetz
16 years 4 months ago
Hi Kailashana,
lyz
16 years 4 months ago
Dear Jetz
jetz
16 years 4 months ago
Hi Lyz,
lyz
16 years 4 months ago
Dear Jetz