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Essence

 Essence
            

     What words do I tell you
          what phrase shall I use
     To convey  all my feelings
          and the depth of them too
     Each line that I write
          each word that I choose
     Just isn't enough
          to explain it to you

     How far the horizon
          how blue is the sea
     How long is forever
          am I really me
     Will the sun always shine
          and the stars twinkle too
     How can I tell you
          how much I love you

     You're my first thought each morning
          as I rise from my bed
     You're my last thought each evening
          as I lay down my head
     As I go through my day
          it's your face that I see
     If a song fills my heart
          it's a song you gave me

     So, how do I tell you  
          can I make your heart soar
     Can I somehow convince you
          I've never felt this before
     You and me, we're not children
          and we both know our minds
     I want to love you forever
          till the end of all time

     How long is forever
          does anyone know
     Above and beyond
          infinite.....maybe so
     You, you're the teacher
          so school me on this
     Tell me how long
          we share in this bliss

     Tell me, yes, tell me
          what future you see
     Through all of our lifetimes
          together we'll be
     For you are within me
          you've captured my soul
     The essence of Sue
          for you only....you know.

 

 Sue

— jetz, Jan 14, 2010

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Region, Country: South eastern Connecticut, USA

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raskin

16 years 4 months ago

Good one

I like how you structured this, good love poem. raskin
jetz

jetz

16 years 4 months ago

Hi Raskin,

Thanks so much for taking the time to not only read, but to respond. I'm glad you liked it. Sue
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 4 months ago

It’s undiluted and pure.

It's undiluted and pure. Not the kind I write, mine are messy and filled with doubt. Nice work. I suppose it depends on our lovers, eh? ~A
jetz

jetz

16 years 4 months ago

Hi Kailashana,

Glad you like this poem. It's one of my favorites too, though not new. There is also an Essence II, and III. Patrick, Lorien Lord and I wrote Essence III together, a few years back. I completely agree with you regarding what guides us. When one is loved, loving back is easy. He makes my job easy. Thanks for reading and responding. Sue
L

lyz

16 years 4 months ago

Dear Jetz

Lovely to find one of yours here. I enjoyed it. Flowed well, and read well plus I love the title. Content, essence of Sue, and love. Well written. Love Lyz. XX
jetz

jetz

16 years 4 months ago

Hi Lyz,

Thanks for the read. Glad you liked it. As I just stated to Kailashana, It's one of my favorites too. Sue
L

lyz

16 years 4 months ago

Dear Jetz

This is a wonderful poem to be classed as a favorite. I once again enjoyed the re read. I am going to look up the other 2 when I get a chance. Love to you and the family. Lyz. XX