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The blessings of Annushka (God inside ourselves)

She brings me snow silent forests
And sunsets filled with blazing passion
Distant swirling cloud scenes, blanketing our lovely earth
Stories of her gliding flight across the powder soft terrain
She gifts me delicacies of her views and processes
The macro and the micro
She has the visual acuity and the artists touch
The touch
More sensuous than most could ever know
More tender and more present than most lovers could dream
Yet she has never touched me
Save with her voluminous heart
With the filigree of fern fronds
And the majesty of mountains
crowned with glorious sunrise cloud scapes

Perspicuity, her own adornment
Her carriage is her courage
A noble vehicle of humble intent
She slips me watercolours painted in soft delicious magic
A mountainside tree trained by winds to bow to angled earth
With simple lines to draw the eye to dreamscapes within
She is so vast in her quality and generosity
Yet simply understated in her being
To me she is a goddess of the woods and mountain skies

She weaves her lines between the flow inspired by her muse
The constancy and dedication thereby moved in her
Creates a sturdy tapestry of living poetry
And adoration
That sustains her
And most likely him as well
She weaves all this with magic,
Only from her heart, all of this
She blesses me with imagery
By lens and brush, by word and sentiment
By banana peel!
Or any medium before her
She is unlike any other
Among one or two extraordinary creatures I have known
She moves freely beyond limits most perceive
Without ego or greed
She knows what Rumi knows
She lives what Buddha spoke
She is god as she sees god in everything
And thus she gives us god inside ourselves

— Cloudthings, Jan 14, 2010

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About the Author

Region, Country: Australia, regional Victoria, AUS

Favorite Poets: So many... Rumi, Spike Milligan, Keats. Many of the Neopoet clan, past & present. A myriad of song writers, Dylan, Jackson Browne, Lior, & I must add the poetic influence of painters, sculptors & creators across the world... Life really, especially the sky.

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Seren

Seren

16 years 4 months ago

Dear Anni

You have writen a beauty here for dearest Annushka ... and i know she will be overwhelmed ... beautiful tribute kind regards Jayne-Chloe
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

16 years 4 months ago

Dear Jayne, thank you, I couldn't help it, she is such an inspir

Dear Jayne, thank you, I couldn't help it, she is such an inspiration for me in so many ways, & I love her humility & natural almost childlike joy in life, I feel I know her & she is part of me, amazing how that can happen without even meeting someone. Thank you for your encouragement. I am being so naughty stealing this time on Neo (ton of packing to do), but it is so addictive & I so love all of you clever writers of generous heart. Be well Jayne Chloe (love that name), you look so beautiful & innocent in that photo, I know it is a tricky time for you but it doesn't show dear girl, I admire that. Cheers Anni~ "To thine own self be true, and it must follow, as the night the day, thou canst not then be false to any man." ~William Shakespeare, Hamlet.
WF

Worldwide Freeride

16 years 4 months ago

Don't believe you...

Anni this has to be one of the best tributes I have ever seen... and I just don't believe you... you say she has never touched you, but she surely has and as you state has touch us all in one way or another... the difference is here you have lived and breathed her essense and spread it even further across the expanse of the cosmos, I think compounded by your own generous heart. To place such self-belief... no instil it within the folds of your heart as she has done means she is extra special indeed, but I think you have done her justice here, so much joyous beauty both physical and spiritual with added warm compassion and admiration is in play that i think she will bow humble and smile a blessing your way after such words. A wonderful encomium for one such as Annushka and well derserved. This is what I see in and between you both: There is a heart that is both yours and mine, Its beat is always in sync and in time, It silently knows what is best, As it thumps loudly in your chest, It never grows or quietens with age, Yet it always rattles your ribcage, It beats once, then twice, then thrice, Entrapped within your bodily vice, But in vigour, spirit and glee, It is always in time with me. So our hearts are in tandem, The beats never sporadic or random, For you have a special magic touch, So this is a thank you very much, From all the hearts you have clutched, Their hearts forever etched and touched, By the love and friendship you do imbue, So this is for the one and only… you! Nothing compared to what you have written but by eck the two of you are divine indeed! Dale :)
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

16 years 4 months ago

the desire to encourage growth without harm or destructive actio

Ah, sweet Dale you are a soft heart & a deep man, these things you have written are so lovely I have a teary eye... Damn, Neo does that to me too often (snicker). Aren't we so lucky here, so many amazing writers & wonderful souls... There is no comparison with what we write, the virtues in your style stand alone & brighten this already lovely day for me. Thank you dear Dale, a lovely tribute to all of us don't you think? I adore Annushka, she was really the first heart I adopted here on Neo & I am more endeared as the yearhas passed, but you have crept quickly to that lovely reverent place as well, & you are most welcome there my friend, as you are gentle & undemanding, generous & understanding... I see your soul facing the good of life like a lovely flag moved by the winds of destiny (my god that sounds so prophetic, I have to chuckle at myself!)... but it's true it is the image I have of your gentle acceptance of how life is... perhaps I am projecting my own aspirations, but I really do suspect it's in you). In this poem is the essence I so love about love & life... it is what love is in a way, to me anyway, that beautiful mirroring of the good in each other, the desire to encourage growth without harm or destructive action, the sharing or joining of minds beyond egos & material wants... I confess I am greedy for this, I feel I would never have too much, nor do I feel I would ever run out of the desire to offer it back to the world. I love reciprocation, it is a fine & wonderful cycle of exchange of goodness... thus my eventual point, it is what makes god in us & what inspires the desire to share that & seek it in each other... not the traditional sense of God, but a sense of harmony between our selves & all humanity & everything else out there. You light that in me also Dale, I hope I offer you such, that would make me even happier... I think it is what you were saying so I am smiling... Yay, life is good xx Cheers Anni~ "To thine own self be true, and it must follow, as the night the day, thou canst not then be false to any man." ~William Shakespeare, Hamlet.
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 4 months ago

Such suchness cloudthings dear you

Yes Jayne I am overwhelmed, totally. I blush in the hush I feel that sings in my heart you have indeed sent me yours in return with art I know not what to say faced with your display of such wonderful compliments their spray of light clouding my eyes and within them sending me such sunlight, for my delight. Dearest Anni of the tempests calms of poetry's sights and qualms you pen these words so erudite, and I love you the more for it, how can I say thank you well enough, I humbly say just thank you you are my delight. Annushka with all my love in a cloud,look out there in the air see it, yes that one just there!!!! And just LOOK what you inspired in our friend Dale, wonderful and Jayne is ever there with her poetic thoughts to spread and we are happy that they do. Thank you too.
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

16 years 4 months ago

Love to you ... & Jayne Chloe & Dale & all the other lovely hear

Suchness dear Annushka (chuckle), yes indeed sometimes these are the best words to fall to, look at you in your warm cap, radiating smile, seeing eyes & camera... suchness you are, how could I not love ya wamon! It is more than a pleasure to write this... it just fell out word after word after reading your email & seeing your beautiful paintings, you are a precious joy. Yes I am so glad we all know it, lovely Jayne, & Dale are vigilant fans as I am, firmly enamoured of your whimsical suchness... yes, we are very happy they do gentle lovely being we have around us yes, I love this. & through it as I realised by the end of that write, is the way to us loving ourselves as generously, it is too often a struggle to do so for most of us, sad really, we are so ready to give it away. But dear Annushka, we are on the right track here, you weave your lovely magic & the ripples spread as they have here... Love to you ... & Jayne Chloe & Dale & all the other lovely hearts here & in the world. xxx Cheers Anni~ "To thine own self be true, and it must follow, as the night the day, thou canst not then be false to any man." ~William Shakespeare, Hamlet.
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 3 months ago

I am overawed yet again dearest Anni,

Ann of Norway Oh I reread this and am overawed yet again dearest Anni, those ripples you mention in the above comment, they go ALL the way round the world you know, and come back to your shore and rise up into your skies and fall as "it dropeth as the gentle rain from heaven, upon the earth beneath it is twice blessed.." You have penned such a beautiful picture not necessarily lived up to by me, she is but one of the many humans and each individual human has his or her worth ,and they are equally worth, with their own expressions of their being in the manner they are and learn to be. I feel singled out and am made happy that I make you feel happy, that's the main thing with communication, and the finding of others who see things in the same way is very exciting isn't it. Then we can rock away into the land of the imagination together and create all manner of thoughts and arts in our own expressions of the joy of living. The word thank you seems too short but it has the content and I thank you dear Anni once again, my love to you and I hope one day we MIGHT meet, who knows? Annushka.
chumfin

chumfin

16 years 2 months ago

nice meeting you through your poems.!!!!

i love you poem and the energy added to make this tribute, its very inspiring, i would be back for more of your works, hope you would not mind. best regards chumfin