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Jan 14, 2010
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Made me a tear
MADE ME A TEAR ( Mona's tear, to Mona)
she made me a tear of silver
a tear to share
a tear that didn't care
who knew
that love was still and near
and close to you
a tear that like the one's of Mary
Christ's only mother
we are told
that tear fashioned
on the marble sculptures of Carrara
white
and old
it drops
like magic dripping wells
into the chasms of our souls
and there alights
to make us
feel
feel what
the zeal of love's appeal
and cupping it
in our red hearts
we sense the flow
of life it's arts
it senses animate
the skys of heaven
wings and gusts of scented air
flow past and lift the tiny hairs
upon our cheeks
those senses far too fine to fence
in our pretence
of grief
but fold into our
strong belief.
— Nordic cloud, Jan 14, 2010
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Critiques
Lunegirl
16 years 4 months ago
Lovely, such a story about
magics02
16 years 4 months ago
Oh Anna
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
Dearest Ann
lyz
16 years 4 months ago
Dear Ann
Cloudthings
16 years 4 months ago
I love the concept of the tear & it's beginnings, it's inspirati
Nordic cloud
16 years 4 months ago
I took that photo on Monday this week
Bonitaj
16 years 4 months ago
Ah Ann!
Lonnie
16 years 4 months ago
Beautiful, Ann, just Beautiful!
Nordic cloud
16 years 4 months ago
Speaking of crafted
magics02
16 years 4 months ago
Wonderful
magics02
16 years 4 months ago
Beautifu
bjp
16 years 4 months ago
Dear Margaret Ann,
Electric Blue
16 years 4 months ago
Tear