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magics02
Jan 14, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Too Many Lost

Many hurting,
dyingdiggingcrying.
 Much sadness
hopelessness
homelessone less
 Much pain,tearsrains
fears.

Much caringcopingsharing
hoping.

With manylost,dustreturns.

mms 3.28.10  
— magics02, Jan 14, 2010

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Seren

Seren

16 years 4 months ago

Dear Mona

Its such a tragedy and the world mourns there loss ... this had a feeling a despair ... i dont know if thats what you were aiming for ?? but thats how I felt at the end of your write love and hugs Jayne-Chloe x x
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magics02

16 years 4 months ago

Thank you Seren

Yes and it is despair for the people of Haiti, such a calamity and the people, the people, children trying to survive, mothers, fathers, family trying to find family.....my heart goes out to them all at this time. Thank you for the stars and comments gal..miss chatting with you also... prayers and love Mona xoxoxo
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lyz

16 years 4 months ago

Dear Mona

Hear hear, they are expecting another one, not fair. Such a tiny Island. Yes, we mourn together in such a tragedy. Thanks Mona. Love Lyz. XX
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magics02

16 years 4 months ago

I seen that

Poor country running for the aftermath, not knowing and seeing their loves ones lost...makes you treasure every minute of the day when you are not in their midst of so much pain and anguish.. My heart is breaking along with theirs. It is nice to know we share the same sentiments on this catastrophe Lzy and Seren and all the many others here on Neopoet. Thanks girl xoxoxo Mona
Bonitaj

Bonitaj

16 years 4 months ago

Hello Mona!

Interesting that 3 of us (that I am aware of) posted on this very subject today. Kindred spirits we are and it's good that we can give a voice to the voiceless! Touching! Boni
Mark

Mark

16 years 4 months ago

Magic

I like this form very much. I think most good folks feel rather helpless in regards, I certainly do. Kudos for stepping up to the plate :) Mark "some things change, some things do not"
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magics02

16 years 4 months ago

Thanks

We are never helpless in regards, their are those that are though and we reach out to help them the best way we can. Thanks for stopping by Mark, bless you. magics02