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CONSTANCY (MOON)

 CONSTANCY

 

That luny moon 

she woke me up,

and filled my room at night

with eerie light,

that with my dreams

colluded,

this sudden apparition 

towed my body, 

mind,

into its coldness, 

whiteness, 

boldness,

now contained,

inflamed; 

not red 

but white,

yet palest shades of blue

and even yellow too, 

did bleed into

the sight of you,

so round;

a solace to a burning heart

or to a body wracked;

so still, 

so calm, 

so steadfast,

sound,

so omnipotent. 

 

I place my whole 

upon your bowl,

am lulled to spheres apart,

where air is thin, 

and space is vast

around your cratered heart.

 

 

Old moon that sails the skies,

what tales there are that you could tell

of past, and present heavens, hell,

when born of crashing meteors

you took your form,

and doomed to stay so far away

out there in space

forlorn.

 

Great shape of light look down

or up,

to give us constancy,

that we may love forever more, 

your might the tides restore 

and each day,

each hour your magnetism 

swaying

our desire.






Part II.
 

Old man in the moon 

we swoon, 

we dance

we learn to feel the elegance 

of your fine globe

of sunlit fun, 

as round and round 

the floor of heaven you swing

you switch your shape

and indicate

that life's an ever changing thing:

 

We win, we loose at dice

the mice come out to see,

the twisting trees try hard

to follow your degree

of angles free,

in southern parts 

you cause the trees 

to turn towards the right

in northern hemispheres, 

you do reverse the dance outright; 

its left here, 

right there, 

one, two, three, 

and chassé, chassé

pas de deux 

under the canopy, 

we near turn luny lunatic

the clock says half past three,

we step the two step 

up into the boat you make for me

and sway and swing like Pharoahs

across the dark blue sky,

surrounded by the myriad stars

that shine for you and I 

in our demise,

no surprise,

in our jollity.

 




 

 


— Nordic cloud, Jan 13, 2010

About This Poem

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Region, Country: Oslo and Flatdal, Norway., NOR

Favorite Poets: Too daunting this.

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DawningDaytripper

DawningDaytripper

16 years 4 months ago

Amazing Ann, I always get

Amazing Ann, I always get so much from reading your poems. Even when your just having a little fun you inspire me. My favorite verse here was Old moon that sails the skies, what tales there are that you could tell of past, and present heavens, hell, when born of crashing meteors you took your form, and doomed to stay so far away out there in space forlorn. Just wonderfully crafted. We are so lucky that you grace us with your writing and presence! Thank you!! Julie D.D.
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 4 months ago

The robber left behind the moon at my window

Glad, so glad you enjoyed reading my poem, and there's always some humour lurking underneath things, my good friend used to be so very adept at turning the crying of her children into laughter, I admired her for this, as they are so close to each other and the laughter is far more rewarding for the child, isn't it? Grace you with my presence, oh what, what, well thank you Julie for saying such a nice thing, as I do hope I live up to the meaning of my name Ann, which comes from Hannah meaning just that: grace. Not always graceful as I run fast, like a child, in the corridors of the flats here in Oslo getting nicknamed 'spretten' or sprightly one!By the children, not bad for an old dame!!!! They also say you are old aren't you? One just smiles or says oh yes very, very old. I love the haiku of, of course, ISSA:- Since my house burned down, I now own a better view of the rising moon The robber left behind the moon at my window Here the wording might be slightly wrong, but the gist of the meaning is here, and they are anyway translated from the original Japanese and its anybody's guess what all the associations of a Japanese mind finds in these short poems, we cannot appreciate their full content, unless we can read Japanese. I personally LOVE them. Love to you Julie from Ann P.S. As I was out skiing this afternoon, I saw the snow, of course!! But it was grown old and reminded me of the surface of the moon!
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 4 months ago

Ann, always let the moon

Ann, always let the moon have her way with you and you get startling poetry. There are 2 distinct energies here. How about having a part ii beginning with Old Man? Love your new winter picture, too. Hugs, Anna
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 4 months ago

Just written in haste

I suddenly saw the moon on the dance floor, so here's the part II; perhaps it will develop into more? There's lots more one can ponder isn't there, wow unending tales and dramas, werewolf's and all! I am not sure what you meant, but will be thinking about it just now might go out into the 'straalende' sunshine and ski through the snow-decked woods as if I am flying, its closest to flying; yesterday, when I took this photo of myself in the lift, I even took a video with the movie camera on my phone for the first time, of me sking I am looking forward to seeing how to get it into the computer, have no idea, didn't really know how to take film just fell into the right bit at the right moment. And now for the sound of a swish as the ski's almost silently glide across the white world MAGIC sheer magic come with me dearest Anna, Ann P.S. My cheeks were as red as my anorakk!!
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 4 months ago

Two distict energies

What, which two did you mean, I don't think I picked up on the ones you thought of dear Anna? I will always let the moon have her way as the mystical magic she/he induces in me is beyond compare wonderful and energising, its aura of poetic fantasy inspiring my whole being to create, to sigh, to dance, to cry out, yes she has all those qualities that bring out inner thoughts and fire them into space across the universe of my mind. Yowks, and this was just a simple question! Love to you Anna in my sky dancing with the moon many times too, I see you there with a gown of stars floating about reciting your beautiful poetic thoughts. Love from Ann in the night sky with you.
WF

Worldwide Freeride

16 years 4 months ago

Satellite supremacy!

Ann! This is for me the best one I have see you write! This takes you on a journey indeed... far beyond the stratosphere and up in to the ever swirling cosmos, and that seemingly snow strewn satellite has been coated in a glaze of your soul here Ann. This is like a helter skelter of poem, a rollercaoster of emotions and depths are ever present through out but the mood is of sombre soul searching in the twilight hours, to find what lies out there and what lies within. Love the way you structured this poem and how it flows, and wording is like folded silk, smoothly rippled so each verse connects with the next to encase your heart in midnight thought glittered by spinning stars of thought. Superb my friend! Dale :)
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 4 months ago

Gee Hoshephat!

Dale thank you, thank you that is a lovely comment, and a lovely picture you have too, some tree of life electrically produced? Yours with love Ann of Norway.
WF

Worldwide Freeride

16 years 4 months ago

Heya Ann,

Heya Ann... and you deserve it for poetry such as this! Oh and no this picture is not a tree electrically produced it is actually an oil painting on canvas by Robert Venosa... another of his famous works is Astral Circus. He is a surrealist painterin the same vein as Dali, Fuchs, Tomlin and Giger! I don't like all his artwork but this one really is something! Hope it isn't too cold where you are Ann :) Dale :)
L

lyz

16 years 4 months ago

Dear Ann

Dont know about the moon being dominant, but you are with this wonderful poem about it. Very visual. And a pleasure to read. Once again, great pic and I will chat later. Love Lyz. XX
I

Idlemindwondering

16 years 4 months ago

you paint

such beautiful moons whether male or female. Your second verse reminded me of a book I read to my daughter; Midnight Farm, written by Carly Simon. It is a story of a moon lite dance. I wish you well ken