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CONSTANCY (MOON)
That luny moon
she woke me up,
and filled my room at night
with eerie light,
that with my dreams
colluded,
this sudden apparition
towed my body,
mind,
into its coldness,
whiteness,
boldness,
now contained,
inflamed;
not red
but white,
yet palest shades of blue
and even yellow too,
did bleed into
the sight of you,
so round;
a solace to a burning heart
or to a body wracked;
so still,
so calm,
so steadfast,
sound,
so omnipotent.
I place my whole
upon your bowl,
am lulled to spheres apart,
where air is thin,
and space is vast
around your cratered heart.
Old moon that sails the skies,
what tales there are that you could tell
of past, and present heavens, hell,
when born of crashing meteors
you took your form,
and doomed to stay so far away
out there in space
forlorn.
Great shape of light look down
or up,
to give us constancy,
that we may love forever more,
your might the tides restore
and each day,
each hour your magnetism
swaying
our desire.
Part II.
Old man in the moon
we swoon,
we dance
we learn to feel the elegance
of your fine globe
of sunlit fun,
as round and round
the floor of heaven you swing
you switch your shape
and indicate
that life's an ever changing thing:
We win, we loose at dice
the mice come out to see,
the twisting trees try hard
to follow your degree
of angles free,
in southern parts
you cause the trees
to turn towards the right
in northern hemispheres,
you do reverse the dance outright;
its left here,
right there,
one, two, three,
and chassé, chassé
pas de deux
under the canopy,
we near turn luny lunatic
the clock says half past three,
we step the two step
up into the boat you make for me
and sway and swing like Pharoahs
across the dark blue sky,
surrounded by the myriad stars
that shine for you and I
in our demise,
no surprise,
in our jollity.
Critiques
DawningDaytripper
16 years 4 months ago
Amazing Ann, I always get
Nordic cloud
16 years 4 months ago
The robber left behind the moon at my window
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
Ann, always let the moon
Nordic cloud
16 years 4 months ago
Just written in haste
Nordic cloud
16 years 4 months ago
Two distict energies
Worldwide Freeride
16 years 4 months ago
Satellite supremacy!
Nordic cloud
16 years 4 months ago
Gee Hoshephat!
Worldwide Freeride
16 years 4 months ago
Heya Ann,
lyz
16 years 4 months ago
Dear Ann
Idlemindwondering
16 years 4 months ago
you paint