Forever in your eyes

I've come back to read this again. It is very good. The imagery you used lends to the sense of emotion. You used a lot of scents, I like when a poem uses the senses. Nicely done. raskin

You had me at *forever*. It's so beautiful it hurts. ~A

...it is so impressing, to capture such scene and share it with others... beautiful!

Beautiful imagery. Felt like I was there, almost a peeping tom. Nice use of the senses, as raskin said. Keep 'em coming! ~ Gee

Oh what a lover you must be Barry! "The dripping pages Awakening once again the lavender smells, And incense springs, of lilac mornings Awaiting your roses to unfold in the first Rays of touch" And you bed is filled with such perfumed flowers such "incense springs, of lilac mornings............. You transport us, yes you do. Love Ann

I was speachless after the first stanza ... wonderful write Barry well done love and hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x

Nothing in this life is more beautiful than love and how wonderful and how magic your words are the lilac mornings and lavender fields and the scent that comes with it all.. yes and one want to dwell in it forever and forever. Beautiful , beautiful poetry dear B. and I want to give you the moon but can not find the thread to cut with golden scissors and lowering.. love. o molly

Need time to ponder through the walkways of your words to feed my senses on your tactiles... I will return Seabhac

Dear Barry, I suspect you are no child, and yet your spirit is just so, as tumbling through the grasses as they blow, we know who speaks of it, and so we go to the wilds to see what there lies hidden beneath the bridge, the pond now covered in green reeds; and there behold the grasses are laid down, where she and thee paid fair compliments and thus resound the trumpets of the flowers their bowers heralding the coming of the Spring where all swains have a rite, to sink into their new delight and loose their hearts beside the stream. You toe licker you, wow ,no one has EVER licked my toes what have I missed Barry-O'? I loved this comment:- "Need time to ponder through the walkways of your words to feed my senses on your tactiles… I will return" Seabhac In the cabbage patch eh! Where cabbages and Kings reside! And the purple veins of growth sound drums of music in the gentle rain. "Watching your evening shadows Tall with forgetting the long hours" ...tucked into the pages of pressed flowers their scents escape and permeate the air with breath of love. heavens above! We're floating through your dream or seem to Barry-o' and feel like Queens.

I immediately fell under the spell of this senses encompassing love poem. It has quite swept me off my feet. Always, Cat

Every woman who has ever loved, swoons under your spell. Every man who has never loved, wonders why! Excellent write! Bonita j

Great poem! The words are superb, the use of images and figures, excellent. You've become a tremendous poet, I bet you have given a thought in publishing a book. You'll do it, sooner or later. In the meantime, congrats on your progress. Sincerely, Hugo

i am enjoying this one ,,,o its well rounded thought out well some great words you have strung together , have you gone through this one again or is it a new one cos i know you do post some raw and rework i feel this is well on its way yet again B, i am loving it ,,,,,,,,ziggy

Awakening once again the lavender smells, And incense springs, of lilac mornings You got me incensed with this poem and especially these two lines as lavender is my most favorite scent along with my freesia from Italy.. Great one Orph!! Love it!! magics02