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You Think. Again.

Picking up the pieces,

Of a burnt and broken brain.

The time for reparations,

Just the same.

 

Issues of Heart

Set us apart.

You think.

I suggest you think again.

 

(instinctual) need,

To plead

My case:

No Master race,

Just All;

 

Be I,

Socially.

Be we,

Liberally.

Be us,

Passionately.

 

Living, resolving, problems,

Fighting,

But not freed.

 

Transcendental transgression.

Its greener

On both sides

For those who dare to trust,

To Believe,

In the Goodness of...

It creates us,

Creates bonds,

Combines elements

Protons,

Neurons,

Electrons.

Well balanced similarities,

Of difference.

 

Do you see

What I see?

I choose to be.

And it is,

Here.

 

(In the outers of the mind....)

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Lunegirl

16 years 4 months ago

I see clearly the messege

I see clearly the messege you are conveying in this piece, the first two lines are great, a good draw/hook in. I like the title, that was a good bit of the poem as well, ''you think, i suggest you think again''. this piece would work well as a spoken word rapped out. vicki
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Damo

16 years 3 months ago

Thanks Vicki, much

Thanks Vicki, much apprecaited. I haven't ever read this one. I might have to give it a crack. :-) I am re-visiting a lot of my earlier stuff at the moment - as a reminder... - pretty simple style and point...
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Damo

16 years 3 months ago

Ohh and I see the

Ohh and I see the controversy from yours still rages on!! That line between funny anf offensive seems to be a pretty fine one here. I really liked it and could totally see the humour... some people need to chill - byt hey, a bit of controversy = a lot of talk... yay for talk!