Hate Me So You Can Leave Me Alone.

You say your so busy.
But yet you always have time.
Time to stop and see me.
See what I am doing.
See what I am thinking.
But instead of helping.
Or saying good job.
You criticize me.

So I guess you lied.

I guess you always have time.
Time to hate.
Hate me everyday.
Hate what I do.
What I think.
What I say.

Just because you hate me.

Just because I make mistakes.
And I just can't get it right.
It seems like I'm the one.
The one you love to hate.

I guess you just love me to hate me.

Your always there to point out.
Point out my mistakes.
Just because I can't get it right.

And I might never get it right.

So don't tell me who I should be.
And don't tell me whats right for me.
Why can't you just leave me alone?
Leave me alone so I can make my mistakes on my own.
On my own two feet.

Please leave me alone.

I don't want your help.
I don't want you.
I can't stand here and let you boss me around.
Boss me around like you own me.
And if you don't know I can tell you.

Tell you that I don't need you nor want you.

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Silent_Rain

16 years 4 months ago

Oh baby whats wrong, who is

Oh baby whats wrong, who is this for??? You can always call me if you need to talk, I will always be there and will never judge... This is a great poem, and your emotions were let out in it for all to see and relate to, but there is no one in this world that can hate you, your such a beautiful heart and soul, I love you as will as others, dont let that person get you down they will regret it when your gone... I love so much, you big sis!!

broken_skye

16 years 3 months ago

I love you but cn't tell you.

I love you so very much and i know that i can trust you but it is my sercret. If you loved this poem you will love the poem i am working on it is about secrets.

kaligantsaros

16 years 4 months ago

This is Brilliant psychology..

It takes a lot of insight, sensitivity and bravery to come to those conclusions and often we fight back what to some is the glaringly obvious. This is a superb poem because it catches the process at a particular point in the estrangement neither "here nor there hatred" , real gnawing cruelty , then there is this slow torturous distancing when micro-sadism begins to come into the play. I love this poem because the writer cares enough about herself/ himself to reflect on the slow grind to her self esteem and think about its effect but also to share it with us. Great write. Funnily enough it also works as a father son relationship and could be a few good words to some insistent father. Kal

broken_skye

16 years 3 months ago

Thank you so much.

I am a girl of many words and many things to say.

ifoundaplace

16 years 3 months ago

Skye

That's true Skye. You have a lot to offer. You ARE a girl of many words to say. And you have the right to let them out. Scream to the world your true emotions. Don't hold it all inside too long. Somtimes that makes it worse. You have such a wonderful soul, one that does not need the hurt you seem to have from this poem. I Love the poem, Good work. Keep it up, Dani :)

broken_skye

16 years 3 months ago

Thanks Dani

I know my poem could speak out to many people if only they knew it was here....if you like this poem i am going to post a new poem i have not figured out what i am going to call it but i hope that it is just as wounderful as this one.

Carchuleto

16 years 3 months ago

Wipes tear of sympathy

Great emotion in this one. I know who you are referring to, Skye, but your secret is safe with me :) Great theme expressed here. Keep writing with emotion like that and you will be able to snatch anyone's heart.

broken_skye

16 years 3 months ago

Hmmm.....

Thanks Carch for everything.....and i can already snach anyone's heart that is what i am trying not to do......but i think this is my best poem yet.

Irrelevent

16 years 3 months ago

So very honest

Good Job standing up for yourself noone should make you feel any less and like your doing i wouldnt let them make me feel any less