mind bruised part 3. I love you to.

I LOVE YOU TOO Sunday, 30 November 2008 at 22:48For the benefit of the crowd...
id like to repeat myself again
like all those yesterdays and time again before
with all the jaded moons
and wilted petals
I give you.....
a load of fucking hassle
a recipe of grief
I'm mashing up your records
and I'm spitting in your beef
don't even check your wardrobe
the clothes, they ain't there
there strewn around the garden
and i don't fucking care
if you smash my bloody face in
if your pull an burn my hair
your can break my fricking fingers
leave the house all bare
cos I'm laughing at the window
at the look upon that face
as you try an find your brown coat
that I've hidden in some place
you fashion me from treatment
that would rival that of bin larden
you build my weaponry arsenal
from all those little lessons
that you thought it prudent to teach
all the times you were displeased
like that time you watched the telly
an i only flipping sneezed
i did go take your tooth brush
an wipe it round the bowl
then rolled around an chuckled
as i listen to you howl
from the pains that racked your belly
as your were being sick
remorse wasn't on my agenda
i just thought you stupid dick
an if you ever again think to try me
with your special loving true
ill cut that fucking thing off
an feed it right back to you

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Kailashana

16 years 4 months ago

Nothing to forgive, loved

Nothing to forgive, loved it. Much had the same thoughts tho I never acted them out. But there are some typos and phrasings... I'll come back later, unless someone else wants to do the honours. (And it is an honour!) ~A

Lunegirl

16 years 4 months ago

Hey Anna

Thanks, I have been having problems with the spell checker on here. Feel free to correct ; ) x vicki

Roscoe Lane

16 years 4 months ago

You read

You read like a very brave, and also very resolute woman. I hope each time you write about your experiences, you get some solace. Brave and great... Love Roscoe....

Lunegirl

16 years 4 months ago

Evening Rosco

Thanks, I have dealt with my deamons now ; ) Part four was the last time i will write about that subject. I have got other ones i wrote from years ago that i may post in the future, but fornow i think you have all had enough of that lol. Time for other things.... love vix

kaligantsaros

16 years 4 months ago

The Revenger's tragedy...

I am so glad I can't find reason to write this in my life. I think the typos make it a far more egalitarian write and would not want to change it, The sentiments universal and victims actions a lesson to the oppressor but also a weight to the victims memory and conciousness. Here we have a critical mass of suffering much like a self sustaining tyre fire where the only answer is to remove combustible material from the pile. A tragic but needed revelation of how oppression leads to reaction that is truly a tragedy for the revenger to carry. Kaligantsaros

Lunegirl

16 years 4 months ago

Hey kalthanks for

Hey kal thanks for reading, oooooh id be a bit scared of my self if i had really done all those things in revenge ; ) I just put paint in his coat (that i bought) and some fish in his prize vinal collection. I wouldn't spit in someones food or use their toothbrush as a toilet cleaner, it does however touch on what you were saying about being pushed to feel like that!! Anger is so negative as is revenge so i say its best to bin those as soon as possible, although it is healthy to feel anger, channeling correctly is what i find really helped to heal. vicki ; )

orgami

16 years 4 months ago

:(

brilliantly said especially the dick cutting part!