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Jan 09, 2010
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Our Secret
My love goes hand in hand
with you walking
alone in the sand, before
the last flaming rays
of this inmense poetry
I can't forget.
This mystery, the seagulls,
the memories of your
voice coming along,
keeping pace
with the truth;
an inmensity so sacred,
that without you
there will be no more
music left
to light our way
into this unknown,
even unto the end
of all forgetfulness.
It was for this love, for this
feeling without a breath
singing the same song
forever, that I came to know
the source of love.
This day, of all other
days, something has been
created which is different and
beautiful: the love
we keep inside
as a secret for the ages
coming and going like the sea,
always immensely blue
and tacit, like you and me.
Comments
Nordic cloud
16 years 4 months ago
Where we ebb and flow forever.
hugo la rosa
16 years 4 months ago
Dear Ann:
seabhac
16 years 3 months ago
Hi Hugo
hugo la rosa
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Seabhac:
Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
Shhhh…. I won’t tell if
hugo la rosa
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Kailashana:
docmaverick
16 years 3 months ago
As a secret for the ages....
hugo la rosa
16 years 3 months ago
Docmaverick:
Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Hugo, procrastination
hugo la rosa
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Kailashana: