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Them.

Tears fall from her face
like rain falls from the sky.
She wishes it didn't have to be this way.
And only wonders why.

Why he made her cry.
Why he made her sad.
And why her love was not strong enough.
Strong enough to keep hem there.

There with her and not with them.
Them, them, them.
That is what she thought about all that day.
All that week.
All that month.
And all that year.

There is something.
Something he missed.
And she knew it.
She knew that he missed her eyes,
her nose,
her lips.
And most of all she knew that he missed her.

He knew that had made a mistake.
He knew that if he didn't do that she would have broken up with him.
And then she would of missed his eyes,
his nose,
his lips.
And most of all he would know that she missed him.

 

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Morgana Tragic Proprietress

Morgana Tragic…

16 years 4 months ago

Heya Skye, Good poem, good

Heya Skye, Good poem, good story, I am not big on romance ones, but I do have a few suggestions for this one. First off, grammar and spelling. "hem" = "him". You used "her" a few times in the second stanza which I am assuming was supposed to be "he". You used good punctuation this time around, and a huge difference in how it was read and the smoothness of it. Fix up those few errors and it should be good. :) Peace~~~~
B

broken_skye

16 years 4 months ago

Thank you.

I have fixed all the errors and thank you for pointing them out.
S

Silent_Rain

16 years 4 months ago

Oh my Skye

Great poem, It was slitly confussing at first i had to re read it but i was a little distracted at the moment and all, I think you need to reread the thrid line in the trird stanza, i think something there is wrong... I love you!! ~Rain~