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NEOPHASES OF THE MOON

 

NEOPHASES OF THE MOON

 

Neophases of the moon

look here we swoon 

as moonstruck

we pass from phase to phase

from poets glow to poets snow,

through poets joys and poets woe,

so many are the ways 

of expressing what we know

(or think we know)

we contemplate,

for moons do make us so

and in our hours of meditation

glean thoughts from every situation,

slowly congealing 

the feeling of awe

at the moonstruck visions

that rise and fall

from the pens of our comrades in words,

who with swords and kisses, 

fly high

in the fields of rhetoric, 

under the sky

of our knowledge like porridge,

our daily forage,

spin a yarn 

and let shooting stars

carry their silvered letters, charged

from hearts that pound with passion,

not following the fashion 

like puppets, 

more like sages, 

sipping wine

they often dine together 

in every sort of weather

eating words, 

making complicated combinations,

causing sudden strange elation,

when like the moon they wax so whole,

we barely feel we've made it

so

as round and round changing shape,

its metre, its patterns on the snow 

of shadowed trees,

becoming spot-lit by each others comments 

on the breeze.

 


— Nordic cloud, Jan 11, 2010

About This Poem

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Region, Country: Oslo and Flatdal, Norway., NOR

Favorite Poets: Too daunting this.

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lyz

16 years 4 months ago

Magical poem,

I think Nina will love this. Ann it is a beauty. Written well and read with ease, slowly it sounded narrative. I truly enjoyed your words. Well done. And a great entwining of Neopoet as well. You nailed this wonderfully. To the poet, bravo. And I hope you are rugged up. Love Lyz. XX
Seren

Seren

16 years 4 months ago

Dearest Ann

Tis a magikal write dear lady ... love and mountains of hugs Jayne-Chloe
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 4 months ago

The Queen knows...

Her subject well. Whatever would we do If her fingers went to hell I think certain, of missing you Your words fall gently with Regalness, said her knights And Dragons from our myths Making our world so bright ~ Sir Gee
Pamela A. Lamppa

Pamela A. Lamppa

16 years 4 months ago

sound that simply delights the mouth

"and in our hours of meditation glean thoughts from every situation, slowly congealing the feeling of awe at the moonstruck visions that rise and fall from the pens of our comrades in words," How beautifully you weave words and internal rhyme to simply make this poem sing. What a sheer delight to read and enjoy. I found myself drifting within your magic moon, self to swoon on breath of night, that for once I just might, find vision before noon. Pure poetry in this well executed verse. You command language well and hold your reader tightly. When read aloud, and most poetry should, this is grand and elegant with beautiful sound that simply delights the mouth. Lovely work. Lovely lovely work. Thank you for this delight. ~Pamela
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 4 months ago

And just look at yours!“I

And just look at yours! "I found myself drifting within your magic moon, self to swoon on breath of night, that for once I just might, find vision before noon." Oh dear Pamela and I feel you are clever at the history of poetry and understand much within its halls of magical verses, and therefore am honoured by your thoughts on mine. And to think that I didn't write poetry before two years ago, I had written one or two when young, letters have made up most of my prose, non stop, and if there were things of beauty they were always different , written in black ink on white paper, and gone to the winds. I admit that a lot of my letters were able to be turned into poetry as I have always loved the sound-lilt of words, their music and patterns as I love music too, mostly of classical nature or song/opera; but also trad. jazz and modern music, oh there are so many genres its impossible to separate them all. It makes me so happy to think that you, of all the poets here, enjoy what I have written, your encouragement gives impetus to further work, although I would rather call it play as it is as if I dance the words like shadows from the thoughts my brain tosses out at me, and to my surprise there they lie, fixed in time. Magic really!!! Thank you Pamela. With love from Ann of Norway.
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Idlemindwondering

16 years 4 months ago

I can relate as any poet would

To be honest I have not ridden the cycles here at neo, being new and struggling to feel at home. but have lived the seasons and rode tides of many moons in other places and live to experience the words and imagination of my fellow poets. a wonderful tribute. ken