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NEOPHASES OF THE MOON
NEOPHASES OF THE MOON
Neophases of the moon
look here we swoon
as moonstruck
we pass from phase to phase
from poets glow to poets snow,
through poets joys and poets woe,
so many are the ways
of expressing what we know
(or think we know)
we contemplate,
for moons do make us so
and in our hours of meditation
glean thoughts from every situation,
slowly congealing
the feeling of awe
at the moonstruck visions
that rise and fall
from the pens of our comrades in words,
who with swords and kisses,
fly high
in the fields of rhetoric,
under the sky
of our knowledge like porridge,
our daily forage,
spin a yarn
and let shooting stars
carry their silvered letters, charged
from hearts that pound with passion,
not following the fashion
like puppets,
more like sages,
sipping wine
they often dine together
in every sort of weather
eating words,
making complicated combinations,
causing sudden strange elation,
when like the moon they wax so whole,
we barely feel we've made it
so
as round and round changing shape,
its metre, its patterns on the snow
of shadowed trees,
becoming spot-lit by each others comments
on the breeze.
Critiques
lyz
16 years 4 months ago
Magical poem,
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
Dearest Ann
Geezer
16 years 4 months ago
The Queen knows...
Ink Dragon
16 years 4 months ago
Ann, you mischievous dear old woman!
Pamela A. Lamppa
16 years 4 months ago
sound that simply delights the mouth
Nordic cloud
16 years 4 months ago
And just look at yours!“I
Idlemindwondering
16 years 4 months ago
I can relate as any poet would