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Jan 11, 2010
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determination seeking hope
the dark horse trampled the dirt
with determination seeking hope
and only two distinguishable thoughts-
but between the rage and the love
only one proved true
for there is no affection
in what he is doing
the yearning bird flies
with determination seeking hope
and only two distinguishable thoughts-
but between the rage and the love
only one proved true
for burn as many bridges as you like
he still has his wings
and he who forgives be not forgiven
yet he who forgets be not forgotten
— zach, Jan 11, 2010
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Arrow
16 years 4 months ago
I read this several times and