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Jan 11, 2010
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Avacado Smiles
Avacado Smiles
I found spirit in time,
hands that moved about a clock face,
and fortitude that spread
the grin I needed to share.
It wasn't like saving pennies;
easy toss into a plastic jar -
it was harder than that,
like painting a perfect nose
on an alligator pear
waiting for it to smile.
The treasure was knowing
that care moved within my veins,
and vibrated your essence.
Happiness found its place.
I could only offer my hand;
soft words
and genuine concern
but you found them enough
to embrace your valor
and step forward.
I found spirit in time,
hands that moved about a clock face,
and fortitude that spread
the grin I needed to share.
It wasn't like saving pennies;
easy toss into a plastic jar -
it was harder than that,
like painting a perfect nose
on an alligator pear
waiting for it to smile.
The treasure was knowing
that care moved within my veins,
and vibrated your essence.
Happiness found its place.
I could only offer my hand;
soft words
and genuine concern
but you found them enough
to embrace your valor
and step forward.
— Pamela A. Lamppa, Jan 11, 2010
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lyz
16 years 4 months ago
What a lovely poem
Pamela A. Lamppa
16 years 4 months ago
Thank you Lyz
Geezer
16 years 4 months ago
Sounds like...
Pamela A. Lamppa
16 years 4 months ago
Thank you Geezer
Quillsvein1
16 years 4 months ago
A sincere and
Pamela A. Lamppa
16 years 4 months ago
GB