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magics02
Jan 10, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

One Little Kiss

Why leave this placeIs it a lack of chase,Or lack of comets little race
Lack of nods, lack of face
 Why leave this place,
For what have you learned
Let it go, just be forewarned
One little kiss to keep you warm Let your words ring out so trueGet your feelings out, forget the bluesOnly you, can make it work,Try your best, forget the quirks,
 Your a winner, come one, come allFor only you, can break the fall..
Get right back up and do your thingFor it's only you,  that makes you sing

Live your life and make it rightForget about some little old plight
Men can come, men can goFor all you know, just let it roll

To allow to let others run your lifeIt's not worth your pain, not even the strife.Learn to let go and live as you wishFor I send you just  this one little kiss. 


mms 3.28.10
— magics02, Jan 10, 2010

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magics02

16 years 4 months ago

You shiver me timber you....lol

Indi that was nice of you..I just sat here tonight tired and all and not really in the mood to write but out it came and onto the site and oh my what a freezzing nite... luv ya my Indi guy...your a special one to me here.. magics02 x0x0x0x0
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magics02

16 years 4 months ago

My indi

How special you write of me like this. Your a gem of a jewel and I thank you muchly here.. talk to you soon my Indi friend. love and hugs magics02 xoxoxoxo
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magics02

16 years 4 months ago

I just love this one so much

Indi I have to tell you how special you are to me and how beautiful this was today for me to wake up to. Thank you again ever so much. you are a true person for sure, my friend xoxoxoxo magics02
DawningDaytripper

DawningDaytripper

16 years 4 months ago

Right you are Ms. Mona, I

Right you are Ms. Mona, I have been there, and returned. It took me awhile for this lesson. I am glad I finaly got it licked ;-) now I just keep looking forward to make sure I don't trip! I always remember your old signiture line, forgive me if the quote is not perfect, Don't let your failures go to your heart or let your victories go to your head! Or close to that, anyways. That was a great read. Julie D.D. But whats going on with your formatting? I suggest only writing in onespot, notepad or MW. And then after all editing, cut and pasting into the poem loader. And doing all corrections on the original, so the formating is consistant. Just a thought. It took me a while. Sometimes you have to clear your format in the loader for it to transfer right, depending on which program your using to write from. No worries, just a format.
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magics02

16 years 4 months ago

Thank you my dd

Your correct and I shall follow your wonderful advice. Your a great one you know it!! love magics02 xoxoxoxox
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magics02

16 years 4 months ago

Thank you my snowlady

Thank you Anna and yes I am of this nature and only speaking from heart, mind and soul here. Miss talking to you and thank you for the stars and comment. Stay warm as it has been record breaking temps here in Florida.. love, magics02 xoxoxoxoxo
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magics02

16 years 4 months ago

Again

Here you go trying your bashing on me again, sorry it will not work this time and yes I will praise the Lord and you may pass the alliteration please. Thank you magics02
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lyz

16 years 4 months ago

Dear Mona

A sweetheart is right. Lovely poem for a friend. A+ for a wonderful write. Love Lyz. XX
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magics02

16 years 4 months ago

Thank you

Lyz thank you for such a sweet comment. Miss chatting with you magics02 ooxx00xx0x0
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magics02

16 years 4 months ago

Don’t let your failures go

Don’t let your failures go to your heart or let your victories go to your head! Or close to that, anyways. That was a great read. Julie DD this is not my quote this is Kaili's but thank you for reading and yes I needed to do this in word but it came out too fast and there it went. Thank you honey and talk to you soon. love, magics02
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magics02

16 years 4 months ago

Write on My Annie

I hear you my girl. I too do not care about the stars they are nice to get but what do they say actually, its more the comments of someone who gets your poem. loves it. suggestions of it, etc. We are here for one purpose and only one and that is to enjoy each other's poetry and write how we feel and we see. I am glad Huey is not leaving and for anyone else thinking about leaving here don't do it..You must keep your inspiration up yourself dont count on stars, and moons, and whatever to keep up your writings. Cheers to all of neopoets writers. Much Love and Compassion to all of you and a kiss for you Annie.. xxxxxxxxxx magics02
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 2 months ago

oh darls,

I have to admit I like this, your heart and your message shines so warmly. How could I criticise your form? But cheekily I live in hope. Cheers, Jess, reprehensibly irrepressible is that netter?
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magics02

16 years 4 months ago

No forced rhymes here

Repeat your message here..but through it all poetry I have to admit I dont like..and then your heart and your message shines so warmly.. mixed message or better yet rewrite your comment so I am sure I got your message of some sort..lol good day elf and how are you doing by the way?? Remember also I told you I do not force my rhymmes this is how I write and this is how I write..everyone writes differently cant we all see this on this site allready?? lol magics xoxoxox
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 4 months ago

its not such a mixed message

I like the content but not the form. And as we can all write what we like, we can all like or dislike what we like. But transparently no mixed message at all here- I love your loving heart. Cheers, Jess, reprehensibly irrepressible
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magics02

16 years 4 months ago

Love you too my elf

Thank you my dear and dont let one or two people here upset you as you see its not worth it...people need to get over their meaness or try to emilinate it from this site...and forgive the biggest thing a man or woman can do. I appreciate you elf and you know it. xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxooxoxoxo Mona
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poewriter58

16 years 4 months ago

Mona

Thought you escaped me? lol At first reading I find way to many lack of how can you better express lack empty,void,hole,missing etc Other than that it is a very heartfelt and warming poem Chrys
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magics02

16 years 4 months ago

??

Poe I didnt understand this message can you pm me on it and thanks for stopping by.. magics02 aka Mona lol