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Jan 10, 2010
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Hate Me So You Can Leave Me Alone.
You say your so busy.
But yet you always have time.
Time to stop and see me.
See what I am doing.
See what I am thinking.
But instead of helping.
Or saying good job.
You criticize me.
So I guess you lied.
I guess you always have time.
Time to hate.
Hate me everyday.
Hate what I do.
What I think.
What I say.
Just because you hate me.
Just because I make mistakes.
And I just can't get it right.
It seems like I'm the one.
The one you love to hate.
I guess you just love me to hate me.
Your always there to point out.
Point out my mistakes.
Just because I can't get it right.
And I might never get it right.
So don't tell me who I should be.
And don't tell me whats right for me.
Why can't you just leave me alone?
Leave me alone so I can make my mistakes on my own.
On my own two feet.
Please leave me alone.
I don't want your help.
I don't want you.
I can't stand here and let you boss me around.
Boss me around like you own me.
And if you don't know I can tell you.
Tell you that I don't need you nor want you.
But yet you always have time.
Time to stop and see me.
See what I am doing.
See what I am thinking.
But instead of helping.
Or saying good job.
You criticize me.
So I guess you lied.
I guess you always have time.
Time to hate.
Hate me everyday.
Hate what I do.
What I think.
What I say.
Just because you hate me.
Just because I make mistakes.
And I just can't get it right.
It seems like I'm the one.
The one you love to hate.
I guess you just love me to hate me.
Your always there to point out.
Point out my mistakes.
Just because I can't get it right.
And I might never get it right.
So don't tell me who I should be.
And don't tell me whats right for me.
Why can't you just leave me alone?
Leave me alone so I can make my mistakes on my own.
On my own two feet.
Please leave me alone.
I don't want your help.
I don't want you.
I can't stand here and let you boss me around.
Boss me around like you own me.
And if you don't know I can tell you.
Tell you that I don't need you nor want you.
— broken_skye, Jan 10, 2010
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Silent_Rain
16 years 6 months ago
Oh baby whats wrong, who is
broken_skye
16 years 6 months ago
I love you but cn't tell you.
broken_skye
16 years 6 months ago
Thank you so much.
ifoundaplace
16 years 6 months ago
Skye
broken_skye
16 years 6 months ago
Thanks Dani
Carchuleto
16 years 6 months ago
*Wipes tear of sympathy*
broken_skye
16 years 6 months ago
Hmmm.....
Irrelevent
16 years 5 months ago
So very honest
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