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degrees of minus

Late night on a platform
smells the same in any language,
loneliness bites colder
than degrees of minus,
and thin nylon jackets
cannot contain a heart in hemorrhage.

Smokes' blue,
wreathes a face of shadows
writ by creases of pretense,
seams of failure gaping
grasping, life in slipage 
fading, sliding.

He shuffles our edges of disinterest,
these hardened rails of separation,
where aching hollowness is harried
by the indecency of comfort, 
where assorted refugees from routine 
await  allocated seating
on hopeful journeys' to revival.

Another announcement is ignored,
goes curling into darkness,
we already know of trains
and lost schedules.

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Country/Region: AUS

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lyz

16 years 4 months ago

Dear Craig

What are you doing at the station at night, it can be dangerous you know. Chilly and I bet when it is announced its late or canceled or on strike, that the cockles warm with anger. Lol. Great write and takes me back to the good old days when we did frequent those smelly stations. Lol. Well written. Love Lyz. XX
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Craig Norris

16 years 3 months ago

I was in transit Lyz

at a country station, they are not the same as the city kind in that they are not as anonymous, but some things stay the same. Thanks for the comments, glad you enjoyed. cheers Craig