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You open my eyes
You open my eyes
I have wasted
A life time
In search
I wish we’d met earlier
I would’ve utilised my time
Much better
What’s the meaning of life?
You want to know
You are just at the beginning
I have lived long enough
To know it’s meaning.
For you at your youth
Love is only sex
Perhaps infatuation
At mine, it’s vex, moans,
Bemoans
Also lurking dissatisfaction
Hurts, grievances and palpitation
While you at your youthful stage
Say all without any hesitation
Life has no meaning.
Yes it has no purpose
That’s possibly true
But once born I and you
Have to give our lives
Some meaning for existence
Be it love at the beginning
Or the end my son life has
A great deal of significance
It is much more
Than a simple night spent in bed
When one is young
Also youth is not dead.
Love is life that’s what I know
Life glows
It flows
Those who give life
Moment’s thought
Never in its fruitlessness
Are ever caught
Hope this sermon of mine
Proves divine
Love is a blessing from me to you
Have a meaningful life
Is my message
Dearest young one for you
Critiques
poewriter58
16 years 4 months ago
Way to many spaces between
loved
16 years 4 months ago
thanks