Damo

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Vagine Mamour

Wafting through a pinkish dream,

She resonates above,

A Princess, nay, Galactic Queen,

That permeates with love.

She is hovering, alluring, musky

And savouring the scent

Of thoughts impure,

Vagine Mamour

She wipes her full-moon residue

On my face,

Marks its place

She beckons me to kiss her

On her lips, hold her hips

And pull her lotus down

Commence my growling

Devouring, de-flowering.

Quipping, tongue flicking, licking

At the petal

Rousing up the stem.

Her springtime plumage

And potent pollen,

Ripened for the picking

Vagine Mamour,

More...

L’amour

Vagine Mamour.

Clawing

At her blossom

Pawing,

At her possum

Start brushing at her fur

Lick her dewy pores

Left me wanting more

Of her liquid cure...

Mmmm, Divine

Vagine Mamour

Nothing surer

Vagine Mamour

Divine Vagine Mamour...

xDamo

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emily messner

16 years 4 months ago

Interesting:))))))))

ok i like this poem alot i like how it draws you in and great title

Damo

16 years 4 months ago

Thanks Emily, glad you

Thanks Emily, glad you enjoyed it. This one is better as a spoken word though - I realy have fun with it then!

emily messner

16 years 4 months ago

your welcome

what do u mean when u say better as a spoken word?

Damo

16 years 4 months ago

I have read this one a couple of times at live poetry readings and it gives me the opportunity to play around a bit with the intonation of some words and also 'characterise' the poem with the way my voice carries the words... I am pretty new to the Neopoet community so I haven't yet played around with that option here though (I think you are alluding to that maybe - or maybe I am off teh track a a little).

emily messner

16 years 4 months ago

Cool:)

oh! i see what u mean lol...wow you read live poetry ive never done that before but i have been just givin a chance from my highschool to do it..im new to i just started this week but im getiing used to the diffrent options:)

Damo

16 years 4 months ago

Awesome - you should totally

Awesome - you should totally take up the opportunity! It adds a whole heap of elements to poetry. For me it helped me to overcome my fear of public speaking too... go for it NeoPoet!! :-)

emily messner

16 years 4 months ago

ok!!!

yeah im not shy or anything but we ahve to do it in front of alot of people and i do mean alot.....ill think about it:)

weirdelf

16 years 4 months ago

Love the poem!

It's a content I just can't do. Not moralistic or prudish or shy, just not good at it. A joyous sexuality can't be beat, I envy you the ability to write it. Hey, it's not hard to post spoken word here, just record in or convert to mp3 and post like a poem, your mp3 player probably has an adequate mike. Do it. Cheers, Jess, reprehensibly irrepressible

Kailashana

16 years 4 months ago

Lush, majestic and arousing

Lush, majestic and arousing poetry... as it should be. I'd love to hear it. Please post it in spoken word. Link provided to the right under Navigation, General Dashboard, Share you work... Umm. When you read it at poetry readings.... does the room suddenly become warm? Smile. ~Anna

Damo

16 years 4 months ago

Thanks Jess - and though

Thanks Jess - and though itis about what you think it's about... it's also not what you think its about. It is defineyely a celebration of the female - the sexuality of it is actually a metaphor.... (if that makes sense - confusing I know - yet so is the mindfield of sexuality!) Re; the spoken word thing, I may just give it a crack!

weirdelf

16 years 4 months ago

fuck metaphor

lets all fuck! spiritually or like animals, not that I can tell the difference. Cheers, Jess, reprehensibly irrepressible

Kailashana

16 years 4 months ago

….but are you feeling us?

....but are you feeling us? Wink. ~A