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Complete randomness pt. 2


His ideas are lucid
They have never missed
“I present to you the sequel”
To complete randomness

Every now and then
His mind plays tricks
Like putting out a fire
With oil drenched sticks

Spilling out his head
His thoughts race through time
Complete randomness
Wove in every single line

Like the gum machine
You know not what you get
“Never quarrel with a fool.”
“Can’t catch fish without a net.”

His mind a fickle thing
The way his brain processed
Not the same as others
Very different from the rest

Insane’s insanity
Dreams of “complete humanity”
Rests easily in his canopy
Humility wrapped in vanity

His actions are absolute
Never second guessed
Always acts in truth
Complete randomness
— marich7, Jan 09, 2010

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poewriter58

16 years 4 months ago

Marich7

"wove in every single line" perhaps a tweak of the way this lines flows suggestion Woven in each line I think the rhyme in this poem is excellent it has a very nice beat to it the above is only a suggestion that need not be used but given a bit of thought to Chrys
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marich7

16 years 4 months ago

very much appreciate

i never turn down instruction, thanks and i think that is a better suited line for the poem. would you mind if i took your advice and used it? thanks, Maurice
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poewriter58

16 years 4 months ago

Maurice

Not at all that is what we are here for. I thank you Chrys