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Dreams Of The Three
dreams of the three...
a child will close their eyes to sleep,
dreams sparkle and light up the mind
if i had magic that opened their thoughts,
what wonders in there, would we find
racing across a painted pink pale blue sky,
astride wild unicorns made up of nice
collecting love chains as they pass bye,
ease of movement that has no price
golden sunrays gathered in a daisy pail,
then taken to a safe and warm place
all the while catching white butterfly,
chasing mud covered hands across a face
picking up pavements that start to melt,
sure to carry them around all day
swim jungle rivers, fighting crocodile
making friends with a giant, along the way
scoring great goals on a cup final day,
sister fighting for favourite dolls head
counting the legs on talking centipede,
then store them in your aunt's lovely bed
mud pies and cakes with snail and worms,
travel miles on feathered pathways to a star
riding rainbows on an ostrich, lions at your back,
all this fun and a sunlit morning, not far
Critiques
Pamela A. Lamppa
16 years 4 months ago
wonderful wonderful sound
Roscoe Lane
16 years 4 months ago
Punctuation