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Jan 07, 2010
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Not As I Remembered
Not As I Remembered I went back to where I've beenbut nothing was like it was back thenthe old oak tree, was still there the ground under it still bareinitials of my first love, still shownthe tree had tried to heal, the cut as it had grownbut I had cut it deepforever there for it to keep the old house was still therebeen vandalized and striped baresign on the door, condemned by the cityfunny how I remembered it so prettythen I realize, it isn't much worst, than it was back thenit's not what I remembered it had beentime had faded those memories that are sadand enhanced the good times I hadnow when I think about that shack, in a far away cityI remember my old friends and a house so pretty copyright 5-17-00 hippiepoet69
— hippiepoet69, Jan 07, 2010
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Electric Blue
16 years 5 months ago
Not as I remembered
hippiepoet69
16 years 4 months ago
Your making my day
ngaioBeck
16 years 4 months ago
Remembered
hippiepoet69
16 years 4 months ago
Thanks
scribbler
16 years ago
as i remember
hippiepoet69
16 years ago
Thanks Stan
magics02
16 years ago
Huey
hippiepoet69
16 years ago
Thanks Mona