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Jan 07, 2010
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This Plodding Life (Villanelle)
Within the circuit of this plodding life
I think awhile of love, and while I think
I am a parcel of vain strivings tied.
Where frosted knots and bows entwine; collide
a prayer is had for me, that I may sink
within the circuit of this plodding life.
No greater lessons learned than those from strife
and of their wealth and knowledge I shall drink.
I am a parcel of vain strivings tied
where future visions help me to decide.
I know my love will teeter on its brink
within the circuit of this plodding life.
So many riches gained for us are rife
in gifts returned with every passing blink.
I am a parcel of vain strivings tied.
And Oh, what wealth am I to feel inside
as I am blessed to know and feel such link!
Within the circuit of this plodding life,
I am a parcel of vain strivings tied.
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I have written a collaboration with the one and only,
Henry David Thoreau - 1817-1862
Cento Notes:
1. Within the circuit of this plodding life
from Winter Memories
2. I think awhile of Love, and while I think
from Friendship
3. I am a parcel of vain strivings tied.
from I Am A Parcel Of Vain Strivings Tied
— Pamela A. Lamppa, Jan 07, 2010
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Damo
16 years 5 months ago
I really like this one… I
Pamela A. Lamppa
16 years 5 months ago
Thank you
Idlemindwondering
16 years 5 months ago
I am glad this ended with a
Pamela A. Lamppa
16 years 5 months ago
Smile
Nordic cloud
16 years 5 months ago
So neatly done your poetry Pamela:-
Pamela A. Lamppa
16 years 5 months ago
Thank you Ann