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This Plodding Life (Villanelle)





Within the circuit of this plodding life
I think awhile of love, and while I think
I am a parcel of vain strivings tied.

Where frosted knots and bows entwine; collide
a prayer is had for me, that I may sink
within the circuit of this plodding life.

No greater lessons learned than those from strife
and of their wealth and knowledge I shall drink.
I am a parcel of vain strivings tied

where future visions help me to decide.
I know my love will teeter on its brink
within the circuit of this plodding life.

So many riches gained for us are rife
in gifts returned with every passing blink.
I am a parcel of vain strivings tied.

And Oh, what wealth am I to feel inside
as I am blessed to know and feel such link!
Within the circuit of this plodding life,
I am a parcel of vain strivings tied.





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I have written a collaboration with the one and only,
Henry David Thoreau - 1817-1862

Cento Notes:

1. Within the circuit of this plodding life
from Winter Memories

2. I think awhile of Love, and while I think
from Friendship

3. I am a parcel of vain strivings tied.
from I Am A Parcel Of Vain Strivings Tied


— Pamela A. Lamppa, Jan 07, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: New England - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Robert Frost, Robert Louis Stevenson, William Butler Yeats, John Keats, Pablo Neruda, Algernon Charles Swinburne, T.S. Elliott, and too many more to begin to cover them all.

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Damo

16 years 5 months ago

I really like this one… I

I really like this one... I am a big fan of stuff that flows well and sounds simple but is rich... I also love a bit of positivity.... this one gots it!
Pamela A. Lamppa

Pamela A. Lamppa

16 years 5 months ago

Thank you

This was fun to write and I am very pleased for your comment here. So glad you enjoyed this one. ~Pamela
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Idlemindwondering

16 years 5 months ago

I am glad this ended with a

I am glad this ended with a positive note it seemed such a struggle heading toward bittersweet. and why is it you write about snow all summer then in the winter not a flake? lol :P
Pamela A. Lamppa

Pamela A. Lamppa

16 years 5 months ago

Smile

Thank you for taking a moment to read. You should know there is usually a measure of hope in all that I write and I write of snowflakes in the summer simply because .......... I can. *smile* Very glad for your thoughts here. Always, ~Pamela
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 5 months ago

So neatly done your poetry Pamela:-

How you dress us in robes of the past to waltz the waltz of "life's vain strivings tied" pondering the things that move us and turn our lives this way and that like the season's constantly changing and alternating between the hot and the cold, the hard and the soft the painful and the joyous; no you do not plod you dance Pamela. Love Ann
Pamela A. Lamppa

Pamela A. Lamppa

16 years 5 months ago

Thank you Ann

You are kind with your words and I am so pleased you found some musicality in my verse. I did have fun with this, trying my hand at Cento with Thoreau. *smile* So very pleased for your comment. Thank you. ~Pamela