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Heavenly Highway... [Violent content]

Enjoying the day and taking a ride
Sunshine and "Smoke",.. being outside
But people walked in the road... being real rude
Soon changing his mind, changing his mood

Swerving around them, when sidewalks are clear
They give him the finger as he gets too near
Killer says to himself ; Think that wasn't nice?
How about if... I friggin' put you on ice?

Slow walk in the crossing, against the light
Don't matter to me... 'bout pedestrian rights
Got a ton and a half, of plastic and metal
I'll bet you'd look fine... under white-daisy petals

The street being empty, no one around
This asshole is... going to be in the ground
The scene was seen through a cloud of good smoke
Let's see if he thinks,.. this is a joke

Killer speeds up, not waiting a bit
As he takes from the joint, another good hit
The victim flies through the air with greatest of ease
Makes Killer happy... he slaps his knees

Through the windscreen, on which blood has sprayed
He sees another.... come to give first-aid
He gets him too... Oh what fun
He's on a roll,.. no where near done

The next one to get it, has headphones and I-pod
There's one more jerk, for the lonely grave's sod
Killer strikes without warning, like a cold blooded viper
There is hair waving madly, from the left windshield wiper

Why don't people walk on the friggin' side-WALK?
Side by side in the road...so they can talk
Spring is coming, Killer says to himself, with a smile
I can get a few, every couple of miles

The ones riding bikes... facing him in his lane
Isn't smart at all. He thinks it's insane
Like a prophesy,.. one such fool appears
Killer laughs as he sees the accident near

Someone exits a car, the door opens wide
No where to go...Not on this side
Not the guy's fault, he looked in his mirror
Didn't see the bike coming, no cars were near

It was beautiful. The bike slammed the door
He won't be riding... wrong-side no more!
Flipping up, and over the bars
He landed in front... of the next cars

Thump, thump... They could have stopped in time
Killer guessed that their thinking; "Must be like mine"
Sick of dodging the shit, in the road-way
They all had the thought; "I aint stopping today"

One more for the road, and then I'll go home
I'll write this up,.. it will make a good poem
That ass-wipe that lives just down my street
Walks in the road... just looks at his feet
 

Never worries about... him getting hit
Depends on his,.. pedestrian right
I don't worry, about that kind of shit
Careful...You... could get your's tonight

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

— Geezer, Jan 07, 2010

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Region, Country: New York State - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Poe, Emily Dickenson, Robert Frost, Shakespeare, and many of the poets here at Neopoet.

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hardcorechick28

16 years 5 months ago

Killer rides again....

Fantastic!!! Next time, I think he needs an accomplice riding on the back of the bike and I know just the woman!!!! LOL!!! Killer never ceases to amaze me!!! He sums up how I felt every day driving home from Delmar.....lucky he wasn't riding shot gun...some of them might have been part of the pavement.
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 5 months ago

Killer Drives them dead...

Killer wasn't riding his bike, but driving the car. That's ok though, you can ride anytime, bike or car. Killer needs to have someone look out for the cops and point out potential victims. Thanks, ~ Gee
DawningDaytripper

DawningDaytripper

16 years 5 months ago

Gee/Killer, You Know Bad

Gee/Killer, You Know Bad boys are so attractive. I loved every second of your killer encounter. He gets better and better with every new peice. I loved every insane and depraved second of it. If all horror storys were as entertaining, amusing and engaging as Killers..... the world would be a much more entertained. Perfect evil ryhming and flow. Julie D.D.
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 5 months ago

Thanks D.D....

You sick kitty! I agree, everyone should love Killer. He is our potential for violence, the one who rides with all of us everyday. Love him and embrace him! The next time you find yourself mad at someone, turn it over to Killer and keep yourself out of trouble and jail. ~ Gee
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 5 months ago

“Soon changing his mind,

"Soon changing his mind, and his mood" ..soon changing his mind changing his mood......rhythm? Oh I shall have to come back to this if I do! Hello there Sir Gee out again creating havoc? Love Ann in her castle!!!
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 5 months ago

Sir Gee's Alter Ego...

Yes, We are... Thank you for the suggestion of change. I find that it reads better now. Just a little reminder to all those pedestrians out there, that the road is a dangerous place, with maniacs and Killers.~ Love, Sir Gee
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lyz

16 years 5 months ago

Heeee's Back, !

Bout time i say. And where is your new pic dear Gee, was you joshing me? lol. I will be patient. And thank you for this Killer episode, he has not lost his touch, touche to that. Nice to read about his exploits at a different pace. I can imagine him in his hot leather black jacket, sunnys and that chiseled jaw, mmmm, almost forgot, hes KILLER. Another fine mood you have put me in, lol. Great dear one, just great. I will tune in for Killers next ride. Love Lyz. XX
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 5 months ago

Just a little tech problem...

But new pic. coming soon! Thank you for being on Killer's team, he needs all the fans he can get. He has been kinda down, from a drubbing he got over the holidays. However, the fan mail I've been reading to him has cheered him greatly. All his fans have rallied 'round and given him a new lease on life. You and the fans on Neo. and his support here at home have been great! So glad that his newest adventure has cheered you too. Big hugs from us both, ~ Gee and Killer
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lyz

16 years 5 months ago

Hello, Hello, Hello

I am holding you to it. Lol. How can Killer go without fans?, he keeps us on our toes and gets the heart pumping and the blood flowing, dont tell him that, he will get me. Lol The way he likes blood. Good to see him back in business. Love Lyz. XX
Pamela A. Lamppa

Pamela A. Lamppa

16 years 4 months ago

An interesting tale of the bad boy and his nasty antics.

An interesting tale of the bad boy and his nasty antics. Fairly good flow and meter in this and you kept it up pretty well throughout. Hard to do with two rhymes in each quatrain. Some near rhyme too which settled nicely. Syllable counts change up throughout which seemed to hamper the flow a bit and gerunds were a bit heavy, especially in the first stanza but your message is clear. Perhaps consider: "To enjoy his day, he goes for a ride - the sunshine, the smoke; he's freer outside. But some cross his road and he finds this rude. It changes his mind. It changes his mood." Just a quick thought to assist with meter and flow. All in all an great tale that keeps the readers interest. Imagery is well done. There is no missing what is going on here. I enjoyed this very much and hope you have found my thoughts helpful. Thank you for sharing this one. ~Pamela
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 4 months ago

I do appreciate your input...

As you can see, gerunds are my favorite form of puncuation. I would change it, but then it would change what I meant. Sunshine and smoke: Since we are all adults here, I will admit to being a [smoker] [health probs. not-with-standing] I don't smoke cigarettes anymore, but I occasionally indulge myself in some good marijuana. Hence the reference to smoke. I should have used some puncuation to denote the specialness of the smoke? Two: the reference to them walking in the road, is the habit of many people walking in the road, instead of on the side-walk. Crossing the road isn't on Killer's list of death-penalties. [Although walking against the light is.] Thanks for the suggestions though. I see you are on your toes. ~ Gee
Pamela A. Lamppa

Pamela A. Lamppa

16 years 4 months ago

Ohhh, now that you explain

Ohhh, now that you explain it It is "his smoking habit" I didn't understand it as such when I read it initially. As stated, suggestions for improvement are only those - suggestions. Can be taken or not - it is the writer's prerogative. I will say it a thousand times, "never make changes to a poem that change your initial meaning or make changes to please a reader." Sometimes we get it - and other times we don't. (Prerogative of the reader *wink*) Write on and thank you for the clarification. I will be reading this again. ~Pamela
Seren

Seren

16 years 4 months ago

Dear Gee

I loved this one dear man sorry to be late to the party but better late than never eh ?? hope your doing well love and biggest hugs Jayne x x x
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 4 months ago

I don't care...

if you're late. It is the fact that you always take the time to get here. That makes my day. I have been sick off and on for the last few weeks, but nothing serious. Just the way it goes I guess. A little depression goes a long way. One of the things that keeps me going is Neo. and my wonderful friends here. Anytime you show up is cause to start the party all over again. love and hugs back at you, ~ Gee
Seren

Seren

16 years 4 months ago

well we can have a whinge

well we can have a whinge together Gee lol I havent been feeling too hot either but i am back with my second or fourty second wind lol ... and I always feel bad when i miss one of your Killer poems lol remember how I had a hard time reading them well hes growing on me lol hahaha love you big smiles Jayne-Chloe
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 4 months ago

Whine, whine...

think I'll join you in taking a forty second wind, that's about how long my wind lasts these days. LOL Like Lyn and DD say; It's the bad-boy syndrome. Seems all the ladies like the bad boys. Killer just has this debonair air about him, with his leather jacket, sunshades, and bad ass rides. So glad He's growing on you. He's not such a bad dude. He can pat an old lady on the head and help her across the street, and then throttle a punk and crush his testicles, with nary a thought about either. Big smiles and hugs from Gee, and a wink from Killer.
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 4 months ago

You've found....

...a GREAT "vehicle" for your poetry. Good for you! Now, just let Killer do the talking. A sound effort, indeed. "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 4 months ago

Found A Killer...

Hiding in my head, brought him home and polished him up a little. Now he helps out with my temper-tantrums by going after the things and people that piss me off. Thanks Doc, for your compliments and comments. ~ Geezer