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Jan 06, 2010
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Within the Seasons (Intertwining Triolet)
She walks the path of garden's bloom in spring
rejoicing in the sound of brand new birth
and there beneath the feathered birds on wing,
she walks the path of garden's bloom in spring.
Tied ivy vines and lace give sight to swing
with soft allure of spring in all her worth.
She walks the path of garden's bloom in spring
rejoicing in the sound of brand new birth.
Rejoicing in the sound of brand new birth
sweet summer warms and dazzles her soft smile
with whispered seeds implanted in her earth
rejoicing in the sound of brand new birth,
As each new seedling sprouts within tiered berth
her calm displays and settles there awhile.
Rejoicing in the sound of brand new birth
sweet summer warms and dazzles her soft smile.
Sweet summer warms and dazzles her soft smile
propelled on air now crisp with colored leaves
to gently fall in playful breeze-blown style.
Sweet summer warms and dazzles her soft smile.
As auburn hues are blended to beguile,
her heart is warmed in joy which she achieves.
Sweet summer warms and dazzles her soft smile
propelled on air now crisp with colored leaves.
Propelled on air now crisp with colored leaves,
in softly mingled breath of winter snow
sweet slumber sings within the way she weaves;
propelled on air now crisp with colored leaves.
Kissed softly in farewell she lets them go
and sleeps beneath her blanket of frost heaves,
propelled on air now crisp with colored leaves
in softly mingled breath of winter snow.
rejoicing in the sound of brand new birth
and there beneath the feathered birds on wing,
she walks the path of garden's bloom in spring.
Tied ivy vines and lace give sight to swing
with soft allure of spring in all her worth.
She walks the path of garden's bloom in spring
rejoicing in the sound of brand new birth.
Rejoicing in the sound of brand new birth
sweet summer warms and dazzles her soft smile
with whispered seeds implanted in her earth
rejoicing in the sound of brand new birth,
As each new seedling sprouts within tiered berth
her calm displays and settles there awhile.
Rejoicing in the sound of brand new birth
sweet summer warms and dazzles her soft smile.
Sweet summer warms and dazzles her soft smile
propelled on air now crisp with colored leaves
to gently fall in playful breeze-blown style.
Sweet summer warms and dazzles her soft smile.
As auburn hues are blended to beguile,
her heart is warmed in joy which she achieves.
Sweet summer warms and dazzles her soft smile
propelled on air now crisp with colored leaves.
Propelled on air now crisp with colored leaves,
in softly mingled breath of winter snow
sweet slumber sings within the way she weaves;
propelled on air now crisp with colored leaves.
Kissed softly in farewell she lets them go
and sleeps beneath her blanket of frost heaves,
propelled on air now crisp with colored leaves
in softly mingled breath of winter snow.
— Pamela A. Lamppa, Jan 06, 2010
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Ross Hamilton Hill
16 years 5 months ago
within the seasons
Pamela A. Lamppa
16 years 5 months ago
Thank you
Idlemindwondering
16 years 5 months ago
You do know that I LOVE
Pamela A. Lamppa
16 years 5 months ago
Oh good gracious love
DawningDaytripper
16 years 5 months ago
Hi Pamela, I thought this
Pamela A. Lamppa
16 years 5 months ago
Thank you Julie
Nordic cloud
16 years 5 months ago
Oh what a ballet of words
Pamela A. Lamppa
16 years 5 months ago
Dear Ann of Norway transporting in the snow ...
Ink Dragon
16 years 5 months ago
Dear Pamela,
Pamela A. Lamppa
16 years 5 months ago
Thank you Nina
Ink Dragon
16 years 5 months ago
No rushing rhyme, Pam,