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Jan 06, 2010
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A Double-sided Thorn in the Side
Empty corridors leading to
rooms that hold the sounds
as to the heighth and breadth of a life;
blasphemy and unconditional love
has exited simultaneously
from, said mouth.
Avenues plowing through to
dens, that shelter the sights
as to the width and depth of a life;
honesty and deceptional activities
have existed at the same time,
from said brain.
it sounds insane
but, the fact still remains,
truer words, were never spoken;
sidewalks leaning on towards
the gardens of my iniquities,
and the library of my thoughts...
where I revisit all of the feelings
that have trespassed two at a time
across the valley of my heart.
rooms that hold the sounds
as to the heighth and breadth of a life;
blasphemy and unconditional love
has exited simultaneously
from, said mouth.
Avenues plowing through to
dens, that shelter the sights
as to the width and depth of a life;
honesty and deceptional activities
have existed at the same time,
from said brain.
it sounds insane
but, the fact still remains,
truer words, were never spoken;
sidewalks leaning on towards
the gardens of my iniquities,
and the library of my thoughts...
where I revisit all of the feelings
that have trespassed two at a time
across the valley of my heart.
— docmaverick, Jan 06, 2010
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Critiques
Antoinette Mar…
16 years 5 months ago
As always, I enjoy and savor your every words..............
docmaverick
16 years 5 months ago
Thanks, Antoinette....
weirdelf
16 years 4 months ago
Uh oh.
docmaverick
16 years 4 months ago
jess....
weirdelf
16 years 4 months ago
Next day and I still don't understand