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My starry promise
My Starry Promise
A promise to me of a new life.
Only through your starry eyes
I will look out at the world so glum
And smile broadly, because
My promise has been delivered to me.
My little starry eyed angel.
Can’t promise I’ll be here forever
But worthwhile will be our time together.
Today I give you my starry scouts’ honour
Thats why I wish upon a star every night
To fulfill this wish, I have in my heart
For your little starry feet.
My little starry eyed angel.
Thread carefully on mother nature
As you go about town, on your business.
For any muddy footprints means
A wakening clean-up, behind you
Which means taking a few steps back.
Instead leave star-dusted prints in peoples hearts.
My little starry eyed angel
I promise you this much is true
For I’ve seen, I’ve done and I’ve said.
Therefore I know this to be gospel.
That’s my starry promise to you.
My little starry eyed angel
By: Qnozz
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ngaioBeck
16 years 6 months ago
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