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I arrive my love

I Arrive My Love

 

My love I now arrive

So far I was waiting for you

Since I know you do not want

With me anything more to do

 

I am still awaiting my desired love

As I always ever do

Wherever you may be

I shall always remember you.

 

You were once the light

Of my very eyes

Now that you are no more

Where on this earth

Can you find one whose eyes 

You can as much so adore? 

 

Please do say

Come into my life again

If you wish you may

Forever and ever stay
— loved, Jan 05, 2010

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Bonitaj

Bonitaj

16 years 5 months ago

Liked the title

but I find the content a little stulted in parts. My love I now arrive So far I was waiting for you (SO LONG!) Since I know you do not want With me anything more to do (ANYTHING MORE TO DO WITH ME) The true plea of a jilted lover! Keep up the thematic work! Bonita j
loved

loved

16 years 4 months ago

thanks

thanks for ur advice and good wishes