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Florida

 FLORIDA

 

There where balmy air

stirs roses, blooms of winter;

there, where oceans meet to mingle

north to south;

there, where my love lives

and breathes, where palm trees 

catch the breeze and rattle,

heat waves rise from tiled roofs,

and stones chat in the stream.

 

There, where gaiters gape at gods above, 

not knowing why they ape his powers,

where sea gulls acrobat,

where pelicans could hide a cat,

where dreams of summer glide

all winter-tide and more,

where shells adorn the shore 

and smooth the sand,

and where my inner heart lives 

enclosed you understand.

 

There where dramas of our civilisation

take their grotesque forms,

where troubled millionaires abound,

with fiery dogs as hounds

to hunt the robbers, thieves,

while they sit at their ease,

directing all around, 

as if they owned this life,

and never bat an eyelid for the ordinary,

mundane, just sip their third Champagne,

and know the drink by name;

and cast an eye on poverty 

disdain within their blink,

and all those good Floridians 

wash up beside the sink

of our society,

sobriety, or in clink they find 

themselves on shelves,

deported from the ordinary place,

so commonplace, so free,

yet bound in life its protocol 

harmony.

 

There where sunsets come and go

full-blooded fine and fiercely coloured,

hurricanes twist their columns 

tall, and send next weeks food to the sea

there, where still the heat bakes down

singeing the edge of quiet squares,

where beasts at night raid dustbins 

with a frightful din

no man would wish to let them in, 

inside their comfy houses,

their villas, gardens, piers, 

their new cut lawns, 

and their wardrobe of ties, 

they're sunbathing, becoming brown 

like Indian's on reserves,

so strange a pass time this

when life is full of blissful things to do,

like walking rowing too, along the Everglade 

canals under skies of blue

oh why do we think its so blue

it is, because I have you. 


 


— Nordic cloud, Jan 05, 2010

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Region, Country: Oslo and Flatdal, Norway., NOR

Favorite Poets: Too daunting this.

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 5 months ago

Well Ann, this in my

Well Ann, this in my opinion, is the pinnacle of your poetry. Florida. Amazing, a piñata, that explodes in my senses, as my senses implode. It's wonderful to be in love. Wish I could resurrect that again. Love, your sister from Ohio, Anna
DawningDaytripper

DawningDaytripper

16 years 5 months ago

Wonderfully delightful and

Wonderfully delightful and warm read Ann, I agree with Anna, a explosion/implosion of the senses. I love reading your charms. I am always left creativly overflowing. Loved it. Julie D.D..
Seren

Seren

16 years 5 months ago

Darlin Ann

********************SIGH*********************** thats all I can say darlin love and hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x x
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 5 months ago

its oddities and beauties together

"tall, and send next weeks food to the sea" That line worried me slightly as did the ties? Not sure. That is when I reread it myself, it was just written after my supper, and then posted with no changes. Wow you Espen, Indi, saying it is perfect!!!! gives a strange sensation in me, it is such a pleasure to produce something that moves, and at the same time has the travelling music of a poem that you can go along with so that you, the reader, are with me travelling this world, its oddities and beauties together as we are of the same 'pack' of wolves and here are using the same language. Thank you all and if I give you creative feelings that is lovely DD Love you all Ann.
L

lyz

16 years 5 months ago

Dear Ann

A very good write. A vivid and colorful write. As for the food and the see, I liked it, it reminded me of how one can be wasteful. You have written a worthy poem and yes you did it, Tant pis, whatever that means. Lol. Love Lyz. XX