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My Daughter Loves Batman



When my younger daughter was seven
she liked to talk
about heaven, and
how she'd like to visit the angels.

She surrounded my heart
with the appalling questions of the wise,
as she still does
everytime
she jumps into the waters of life
and things are kind of sad.

Then again, she liked to talk,
everytime she was happy
at the movies, when we saw Batman
thriumph over the villains.

I remember.

And she still loves to talk,
even now, quite a few
years...
after a divorce.

She was little then.

But just the same she believes
Batman is for real, 
while Superman is perfect as
a lie as big as hell,
flying away into the nothingness
of regret.

Batman is human, you know,
and he can be sad and wise, or
happy and silly, which is all that matters.

She used to say.

She has grown
to her full stature now, and a wiser
woman now.

After all she went through.

She is getting married again,
this Summer.

And I can see she's become
a human being as powerful and great
as a super hero.

She has to be.

She is getting married,
in a little town,
far from the crowd
and the villains that besieged her dreams.

A better human,
Batman has gone up over cathedrals,
churches and rooftops, just
to see the heavens, and the earth, lit
and bathed in moonlight.

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Seren

Seren

16 years 4 months ago

Dear Hugo

Welcome back my friend ... long time no see ... wonderful tribute to your daughter I too am a fan of the Bat lol hes pretty ... ummmm heroic lol ... hahaha sooo good to have you back and this ones got a different feel from your other poetry and love the turn in the road you have taken :) ... Love and mountains of hugs Jayne x x x
hugo la rosa

hugo la rosa

16 years 4 months ago

Dear Jayne:

Thank you for the comment, and the gracious praise. Yes, this poem had to be true to my fatherly feelings. It's different, so I was a little afraid some may not like it. I see I have passed the test. Thank you, indeed. And thank you for the welcoming, and the hugs. Sincerely, Hugo
Seren

Seren

16 years 4 months ago

I ahve changed my writing

I have changed my writing style a little since you were here and its been a very rewarding experience ... I say any step out of your comfort zone is a good step to excellence ... love and hugs back atcha so good to see you with us again Jayne-Chloe x x
hugo la rosa

hugo la rosa

16 years 4 months ago

Dear Jayne:

I feel indeed flattered by what you just wrote. Nevertheless, I have not invented the freform verse. It was there before I came into this world. But I have the joy of being an instrument to you. It is perhaps a silly joy, but it's there. Thank you, Hugo
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 4 months ago

Hugo, this left me with

Hugo, this left me with tears in my eyes. You know why.... I offer one of my favourite songs: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=78aOE23j-vM Bring Me to Life ~ Evanescence Love, Anna
hugo la rosa

hugo la rosa

16 years 4 months ago

Dear Kailashana:

Thank you for the song. It was really beautiful. That was precisely the idea I had in mind when I wrote the poem. I didn't know it was already set into a poetic song. I really appreciate it. Sincerely, Hugo
seabhac

seabhac

16 years 4 months ago

A sigh of lovelyness

I have missed you Hugo and it is lovely to see you embracing life in poetry and sharing with us again. Dreams for our daughters and super heros yes I can identify with this one three times over. Seabhac
hugo la rosa

hugo la rosa

16 years 4 months ago

Thank you Seabhac:

I guess the myth of the super heroes never leave us. We find solace in the hope that someday we may become one of them, or our daughters may possess some kind of power to make their life easier, or live among the great ones. No one can blame us to dream such dreams. Sincerely, Hugo
L

lyz

16 years 4 months ago

How beautiful is this

Well written for your baby. And congratulations on her marriage. Ah, Batman, she may have found her true Batman. A wonderful joyous write Hugo. Love to all, Lyz. XX
hugo la rosa

hugo la rosa

16 years 4 months ago

Dear Lyz:

Receive my thanks for your nice words. I really appreciate your kind comments and encouragement on my poem. Sincerely, Hugo