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Masochist

Nimbly she moved towards eternity,
Her horizon extended never to score a goal.
And his attempt miserably failed.
"Scrubber" he shouted, "You are that"
A moon beamed on her cheeks,
A flash twinkled in her eyes,
Pearls rushed out of her mouth,
Fragrance beautified her lips.

"Nomy dear", she cajoled.
The masochist in him rose,
He had contempt on his body,
He implored with disgust,
"Forgive me, dear, I am selfish"
She had a melody of birds
She had the softness of feathers,
She sang..
He fell.
That ws the end of a masochist.
 
— U K Atiyodi, Jan 04, 2010

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 5 months ago

Beautiful, brilliant and

Beautiful, brilliant and exotic poem, to a masochist, no less. Absolutely adore this poem. I am a fan of your work. ~Anna p.s. You are that! (should have an exclamation point) You are missing a space between *no my*...in the first sentence of the second paragraph, and an *a* in was in the last sentence.