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Jan 03, 2010
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Staring Into THe Sun
Staring into the sun
Forgetting the darkness
Leaving the shadows behind
Blinding light envelops me
Warmth covers every inch
Memories flood my mind
Emotions run on high
Tears streaming down
A smile plays across my face
I feel like never before
This is it, I know this place
Forgetting the darkness
Leaving the shadows behind
Blinding light envelops me
Warmth covers every inch
Memories flood my mind
Emotions run on high
Tears streaming down
A smile plays across my face
I feel like never before
This is it, I know this place
— destiny, Jan 03, 2010
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Lonnie
16 years 6 months ago
Nice, tight little poem!
kowque
16 years 6 months ago
your poem had such a
magics02
16 years 2 months ago
Loved this one also
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