dear man if you felt as strongly writing it as I did reading it ?... hard doesnt cover it a very emotional write in so few words you did it again love and hugs Jayne x x x

doorman

16 years 5 months ago

I found the sketch of it leafing through my old notebook. Brought back a memory I'd long discarded, so it was quite trying to make sense of it all again. Well worth it, though. Thanks again for your honest attention. Yours, Espen.

Nordic cloud

16 years 5 months ago

This is strong,

This is strong, the 'gone' with the mundane coffee cups the distorted face of a poem, good stuff Espen. You appeal to our imagination and deliver enough to set it going probably in quiet different directions to those intended but motivated ones. Jeg liker den surealistiske side til diktnene dine, unnskjyld feilene mine her je gkan ikke skrive godt norsk!!!! Yours Ann

doorman

16 years 5 months ago

Thanks for your compliments,

Thanks for your compliments, Ann. og du skriver godt,- ingen grunn til å beklage seg her. Vennlig hilsen, Espen.

Kailashana

16 years 5 months ago

Espen… there are some

Espen... there are some poets who write a few abstract words and somehow the words become concrete feelings of the reader. This is such a poem. ~A

doorman

16 years 5 months ago

kailashana

I'm truly honoured by your comment, Anna. Thank you. Yours, Espen.

ziggy

16 years 5 months ago

hello

hey espen what a read and the meaning covering alot more ground than it`s words , your writes have meaning in every single word ,cheers ,,ziggy

doorman

16 years 5 months ago

Thanks, appreciate that,

Thanks, appreciate that, ziggy. I'm slowly recovering from the turnaround, and will hopefully be back on track soon. See you around, Espen.