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Jan 02, 2010
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inside & outside the primordial heart
through the frosted glass,
the bough laden with snow,
the branch bereft of leaf,
wind blowing in pristine silence,
snow drifts,
red bows and green lights,
inside the short-needled
pine, dry needles falling,
ornaments
to be put away, the last one
the angel atop,
another Christmas past, another
gift unwrapped but unopened,
the desolation in North Dakota
unravels the best of me.
the bough laden with snow,
the branch bereft of leaf,
wind blowing in pristine silence,
snow drifts,
red bows and green lights,
inside the short-needled
pine, dry needles falling,
ornaments
to be put away, the last one
the angel atop,
another Christmas past, another
gift unwrapped but unopened,
the desolation in North Dakota
unravels the best of me.
— Kailashana, Jan 02, 2010
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Seren
16 years 5 months ago
Dear Mum
CyberSpace
16 years 5 months ago
Anna I dont know what to say
Nordic cloud
16 years 5 months ago
You can say it, we
hugo la rosa
16 years 5 months ago
Dear Kailashana:
lyz
16 years 5 months ago
Beautiful