THE TRUE MEANING OF NUMBER FIVE

Meaning of Number Five No.5

Number five denotes
Money, movement, material,
Meeting the cross section of society
It is a number which denotes
Vision and intelligence,
As also observation
As well as accident
Take care be not casual.
Steer clearly and you will know
Where you will be in five years
Or so

I don’t know where I’ll be
My everlasting regards to thee.
You’re more prolific
More calm
More imaginative
After all
So peaceful
You are calm
As a wind
In a raging storm
The love of life
For many to follow
As a norm
Coz you are
A number five born

— loved, Jan 02, 2010

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Critiques

Morgana Tragic…

16 years 4 months ago

Ok before I get to content-

Ok before I get to content- structure. be consistent in the spacing of the poem. It adds nothing to the effectiveness of the poem to space everything out, it simply makes it look like it's a much longer poem than what it is and people won't read longer poems. As well, put the poem to the left side of the page so it doesn't look so distorted when you post it. Centering it does that. Content wise, this is well written and has a rather serenity feel to it, a bit of peace and affection for a person. I like what the poem itself says once you get past the structural issues. Would definitely come back and read once you fix it up. Peace

loved

16 years 4 months ago

thanks

as perr ur advice i have redone it please do comment agin as when its reposed tomorrow we can post only one poem perday. when a new comment is posted against a poem how does one come to know AT FIRST SIGHT IS THERE A SYSTEM I DON'T KNOW PL ADVISE THANKS AGAIN I HAVE WRITTEN 2110 POEMS FOR TRIOND THIS YEAR HERE I POST SOME FOR WIDER VIEWERSHIP This poem is explicit in its thoughts, for all those who were born on the fifth of any month. Apparently it will not apply fully but partially it will After all statistics is a dangerous game, it cuts both ways .You are welcome to read it with a pinch, if not a punch of salt. Meaning of Number Five No.5 Number five denotes Money, movement, material, Meeting the cross section of society It is a number which denotes Vision and intelligence, As also observation As well as accident Take care be not casual. Steer clearly and you will know Where you will be in five years Or so I don’t know where I’ll be My everlasting regards to thee. You’re more prolific More calm More imaginative After all So peaceful You are calm As a wind In a raging storm The love of life For many to follow As a norm Coz you are A number five born

Morgana Tragic…

16 years 4 months ago

The redo is well done. As

The redo is well done. As for reposting it, just click on the EDIT button a the top of the page when you're viewing the poem and it'll let you make changes to make to the poem without having to post a second one tomorrow. :) Peace

loved

16 years 4 months ago

thanks

can u also tell please me how can one come to know when one gets a new comment on some poem i seem to visit each poem to find out is there a way thanks