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Electric Blue
Electric Blue
Jan 01, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

No one Waiting there for you

  What if there is No one waiting for you What if you live your whole life? Longing for someone to share But find that no one is waiting there Because you go chasing shadows unforefilledMaybe choosing not to see what is in front of youWhere all your dreams can be shared and completed In all you believe in – it is there before you now  I look for the answers  And it is always you and I I let myself get lost in this Amazing wonder that is you For me there are no doubts For sure I am here forever moreTime stood still – come - find me again For you always I am still here with no fear  A melody when all the notes are soIt fills the page and sung in harmonyBeautiful music now played in full Creating the magic that has come from the unison of you and I – createdwithin these four walls  When two hearts so openNo tastes so similar as weNo feelings so in unison are we
— Electric Blue, Jan 01, 2010

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Seren

Seren

16 years 5 months ago

Dear MagzYou are writing as

Dear Magz You are writing as if your despondent ... You know at the end of this one I felt a kind of despair .. cant put it into words sorry my minds just not playing the game today (huggles) and a happy new year to you darlin much love and hugs Jayne x x x
Seren

Seren

16 years 5 months ago

Awwwww darlin … now you

Awwwww darlin ... now you got me going with you (hugs) love you maggie girl ... look up huni the worlds still turning and dreams are the stars,you just gotta reach out and pluck one ... love Jayne x x x
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chrisbyrne

16 years 5 months ago

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I just read this and I actually cried! I just posted a blog, a rambling one then, I read this and it echos how Im feeling. To raw, to real What right have they, our hearts to steal. Beautiful words, you do it from the heart. Chris
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 5 months ago

No one waiting there for you

Chris It only shows i am not alone in this so why is nature so cruel to let you have all these feelings that are not returned Raw yes but it is the truth people just toss you away when ever they choose - been there a few times so know how you feel. But we must never give up on our heart and soul always Electric Blue
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 4 months ago

No one there waiting for you

hello my friend welcome Yes these are very raw feelings - it is about fear that others have and cannot decide - contradiction - I always say it is what is on the inside that means everythng I know vanity takes some people who only look to the outer covering but that crumbles cruely and then you see the real truth underneath but many like myself i see the underneath and that is the trueself i want. You mentioned Avatar strange you mentioned this word. I recently went to the cinema (five times now) and seen a film called Avatar in 3D it is amazing. The graphics WoW but the story line is i would say good over evil. But about being joined at the deepest roots of the earth and soul I recommend everybody to go and see it. I feel bound by an invisible chord to another soul that is where all my roads seem to lead. Hope this makes sense Electric Blue
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 5 months ago

Aloneness so raw, it holds

Aloneness so raw, it holds one hostage. Yup, know where you are dear Mags.... we are sisters in a club no one wants to belong. Love, Anna Don’t let your victories go to your head, or your failures go to your heart.
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 5 months ago

No one waiting there for you

Anna Solitude - yes we all need that too but aloneness is so cruel. As for victories - I have none. As for failure that is my life - not so much of the heart. others do want to belong but not for long? So what is wrong with me? Why do I ..........fall Oh well maybe today will be another day Tomorrow never comes So just try and make the most of everyday. But it is so hard to do so when you feel so lonely. always Electric Blue must go play some music try and write a song a poem ......
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orgami

16 years 5 months ago

I have i

I guess theres nothing wrong with wanting what wants we need so many myth legends are those of seperate systems seperate love to fixate love like a beacon if it sustains i have what i have and yet do i require more fireworks phantasm all elusive chase like riding a motorcycle at night feeling the way with the headlamp the tyres bumping the drone of the engine and motorway a tank of petrol searching seeking something its a fine poem Maggie Love your cheery smile~ Orgami!
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 5 months ago

No One waiting

Orgami Thank you for reading my poem I am glad it brought back memories and dreams that no one can take away from us. As always seeking searching etc. I have a dream that keeps me smiling most of the time. always Blue
loved

loved

16 years 3 months ago

WAIT FOR ME

KINDLY DO READ MY POEM WAIT FOR ME THEN WE CAN AND SHALL COMPARE NOTES WHO CAN WAIT FOR THEE
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 3 months ago

No one waiting

Magic02 I am sure it is a question we all ask ourselves I feel so many waste so much time because they do not follow their heart afraid to take that step so sad everyone looses out. Nothing worse than being so lonely - I know this only too well Still dreaming dreams Electric Blue