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Phoenicia, SC




In my neighborhood
I hear sounds of
Industrious chainsaws

On an afternoon of
Golden light
With an atmosphere

More water than
Air

Workmen carry cleared brush
Upon their sweating backs
Looking as if some green

Legend come to life

I have been a spiritual
Companion
To their work

Their exertions
Cut…rake…lift

Falling into that Zen state
Of non-existence
In heat and rhythm

Where they loose
Themselves

To this waking world
Traveling mental corridors
While...

Sub-conscious portals gape
To ancient shores
Where Phoenician
Traders sail

Digging deep into reserves of
Muscle and sinew

Freeing bronze age anchor
They are echoes of
an echo

Of past effort

Knowing at some mental level
When aquamarine waters
Part...

With the last load of brush loaded

They will be
Free from labor
Having lost themselves

In salt flavored breathing

Finishing their
double exposed tasks
Only to have traveled

Back where they started

In a sweat stained
Suburban yard
With little more than

Sunburned necks

Marking their travels
With fence line
Free

From green growth

As Cedar dappled shores of Sidon
Mix with sunset colored shadows
Of a Live Oak by the
Back gate

DS Baker

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Mark

Mark

16 years 4 months ago

Love this

Dave, I worked trees for years. Roadside, private, municipalities, utility and after a day of it one is left with the feeling the end of your poem leaves me with. Technically it would go - cut, lift and rake. Cleanup comes last my friend :) Mark "some things change, some things do not"
dbaker

dbaker

16 years 4 months ago

Mark

Hey buddy thanks for at least taking the time to post a reply! Happy New Year! I am very glad that you liked the piece. All my very best for the coming year. David
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

16 years 3 months ago

nice job

I felt like I was right there listening to all the logging sounds. I was especially drawm to the title, because we have a Phoenicia here, too. In an interesting comparison, there's no logging, and no machinery type sounds - just the occasional whoosh of traffic which blocks out the rushing of the Esopus. ~Jess K. ----------------------- "Life is the sun, and the show must go on; make it come true. Life is the sun, and the road goes on and on; paint this song any colour but blue." - Don Ross
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 3 months ago

hello

my favorite lines: Having lost themselves In salt flavored breathing I very much liked this poem and found it refreshing. My Dad worked in sodding and landscaping. Your poem reminded me of the times I was allowed to go to work with him as it was his company. Oh, the sounds and scents... I hope all is well with you and the fiction is coming along without a hitch. Always, Cat
Mark

Mark

16 years 2 months ago

Awesome Dave

Sounds like maybe they left in a hurry with all that cedar around hehe j/k tree workers rarely if ever carry blowers lol must have been kind of pretty actually. Been way too long,Dave, Mark "I do not walk the earth and eat out of dumpsters, I'm not a bum, I'm beat."