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Phoenicia, SC
In my neighborhood
I hear sounds of
Industrious chainsaws
On an afternoon of
Golden light
With an atmosphere
More water than
Air
Workmen carry cleared brush
Upon their sweating backs
Looking as if some green
Legend come to life
I have been a spiritual
Companion
To their work
Their exertions
Cut…rake…lift
Falling into that Zen state
Of non-existence
In heat and rhythm
Where they loose
Themselves
To this waking world
Traveling mental corridors
While...
Sub-conscious portals gape
To ancient shores
Where Phoenician
Traders sail
Digging deep into reserves of
Muscle and sinew
Freeing bronze age anchor
They are echoes of
an echo
Of past effort
Knowing at some mental level
When aquamarine waters
Part...
With the last load of brush loaded
They will be
Free from labor
Having lost themselves
In salt flavored breathing
Finishing their
double exposed tasks
Only to have traveled
Back where they started
In a sweat stained
Suburban yard
With little more than
Sunburned necks
Marking their travels
With fence line
Free
From green growth
As Cedar dappled shores of Sidon
Mix with sunset colored shadows
Of a Live Oak by the
Back gate
DS Baker
Comments
Mark
16 years 4 months ago
Love this
dbaker
16 years 4 months ago
Mark
infinite_dwarf
16 years 3 months ago
nice job
Candlewitch
16 years 3 months ago
hello
Mark
16 years 2 months ago
Awesome Dave