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On a Graveyard Walk

It does not matter that

We did not know you,

Your name eroded

Above this graveyard plot

Your place not by history named

Nor connected

To some great events

That otherwise would

 Note your part.

 

For this fissured stone

Would be our lives

Except by your passing

Through the past

From which we’ve come

To play our part.

 

Your tiny cracks

Of missing presence

Would make us all

A little less.

 

With you

From all that was

We’re adding now

Our own forever

For the rest.


— ArrowWords, Jan 01, 2010

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Country/Region: CAN

Favorite Poets: Dylan Thomas, Walt Whitman, Lawrence Ferlinghetti, Leonard Cohen, Constantine Cavafy

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September Daydreams

16 years 5 months ago

I liked the title.But

I liked the title.But honestly I found a poem a bit confusing,lacking emotions.I'm not sure who are you talking about,but the picture of a man walking in a graveyard is interesting.Also,it makes me think of death and how we someday we'll be buried,leaving everything behind and not taking anything,except few meters underneath ground.
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ArrowWords

16 years 4 months ago

Hi, I went back to it and it

Hi, I went back to it and it grew, now titled "Our Past Beneath Our Feet". I tried to get through the confusion by describing how we are joining those past all the time before our physical death and that without this joining we would not be who we are.