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Barbara Writes
Barbara Writes
Jan 01, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Innocence is Golden

Innocence is Golden

Dear love I write this letter
Because you make my heart sing
With flattering utters
That makes me blush

You make me flirt
Wiggle like jelly
When I see you coming
In my direction

When feeling bashful
Blushing pink
You make me giggle
When you touch my cheeks

Like a virgin on prom night
Experiencing her first love
You make my heart beat quickly
When you kiss my lips

A girl living the new thirties
Innocence is golden
— Barbara Writes, Jan 01, 2010

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Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins, Shakespeare, , Emily Dickinson, , , Whitman, Jess Tapper

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sunscreen

sunscreen

16 years 5 months ago

Hmmm.......

Using Cuz instead of Cause makes this somewhat unappealing, and the repetition of it is sort of like a song. The last two lines could use a little revision. I'm no expert that is just my opinion, happy new years day, and good luck. :)
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

16 years 5 months ago

Thanks for critiquing

cause does sound better. because sounds even better ~~~~~~~~~ Be whoever you are At all times, and Remember that Because of this, people will Always Respect, and Admire you ©2008Leonard Respectfully Yours, Barbara
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

16 years 5 months ago

Brian

thanks for reading and commenting. the forties is rough. I though writing this might lighten up the mood at least for me. Glad it lighten thing up for you. ~~~~~~~~~ If you don't like it, can't talk about it, then write about it. Respectfully Yours, Barbara
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Average

16 years 5 months ago

i think i like your poem

i think i like your poem it's great. i am captivated by your romantic use of language. keep it up.
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

16 years 5 months ago

Average

Glad you like it. I wanted the poem to speak in a soft sensual tone. ~~~~~~~~~ If you don't like it, can't talk about it, then write about it. Respectfully Yours, Barbara