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Into

Into

Into the realms of unexplored time

Now I enter with a refurbished mind.

With thought and renewed determination

Yet I still have to pave my way

Through the tunnels

Of unknown wonderful exploration

 

Without secondary thought or confusion

Already darkened at its very entrance

With hopes to see the rays of light

Emerge as I reach the farthest end

Of my life’s preordained mission

In your lovely warm and welcoming eyes

It will be an eventful redemption.

 

There I will be surprised to see you

Awaiting in your very person

For my appointed arrival

It’s been a long sojourn

Through the darker portals of time

Though through the unknown darkness

Life has been so kind and yet sublime.

 

As we once again merge together

Into the annals of timelessness of time

Our souls will unite to finally submerge.

Till then you have to wait

That anointed hour

When we reach there

He’ll be still               Oh my love, Oh! My Lord

I shall be then merging

Ultimately and wholly with thee

— loved, Dec 31, 2009

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weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 4 months ago

I really believe that your poetry would improve

by leaps and bounds if you focused more on getting feedback and improving the ones you have written than writing new ones. You are certainly talented. This, like many of yours, is over wordy, needs to be edited. Cheers, Jess, reprehensibly irrepressible
loved

loved

16 years 4 months ago

thanks

i enjoy reading ur comments and pay heed to advice as i compose newer ones old ones are lost in the debris of time howz this one cant publish yet as days quota is only one i write seven poems a day off the cuff for fun as i am no poet a scientist i am one thanks again One Life I wouldn't like to walk this path again Life is simply vain It has to be so I wish to here remain. I wouldn't like to pass this world again No matter what you may wish No one can ever be reborn So while alive Be not torn. Live this life to the hilt For one can never be reborn Hope you get my message Loud and clear Live this life wholly With love Without any fear shall post this if i have a chance to do so