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Into
Into
Into the realms of unexplored time
Now I enter with a refurbished mind.
With thought and renewed determination
Yet I still have to pave my way
Through the tunnels
Of unknown wonderful exploration
Without secondary thought or confusion
Already darkened at its very entrance
With hopes to see the rays of light
Emerge as I reach the farthest end
Of my life’s preordained mission
In your lovely warm and welcoming eyes
It will be an eventful redemption.
There I will be surprised to see you
Awaiting in your very person
For my appointed arrival
It’s been a long sojourn
Through the darker portals of time
Though through the unknown darkness
Life has been so kind and yet sublime.
As we once again merge together
Into the annals of timelessness of time
Our souls will unite to finally submerge.
Till then you have to wait
That anointed hour
When we reach there
He’ll be still Oh my love, Oh! My Lord
I shall be then merging
Ultimately and wholly with thee
Critiques
weirdelf
16 years 4 months ago
I really believe that your poetry would improve
loved
16 years 4 months ago
thanks