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Kailashana
Kailashana
Dec 31, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Some more Haiku(esque) Stuff

A poem is a story
the heart makes,
yearning to be spoken...

~~~

walking
into the New Year
on baby feet

~~~

ice moon corona
as large as the winter sky
blue tears of goodbye







— Kailashana, Dec 31, 2009

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seabhac

seabhac

16 years 5 months ago

Angel of words

Walking into the New Year on baby feet...tiny faltering steps into the new... I just delight in this Thanks for the gift Happy Hogmany and I guess your words may well be my 'first footer' Seabhac
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RobertKnott

16 years 5 months ago

i like haiku.

brevity; much can be read in a few thoughts. wonderful! tainted sorrows past heralds new kiss yesterdays blossoms by a spring
Seren

Seren

16 years 5 months ago

Dear Mum

I loved the same lines as Liz ... baby steps into the new year softly softly love and hugs Jayne x x x