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A DROWNING MAN

A DROWNING MAN I A drowning man called on God to helpAs a last resort to his irredeemable stateA floating log of wood passed him byWhile waiting for a hand from the skyHe queried his faith when nothing came 

At the portals of heaven’s gate, in afterlife

We were told, he asked, why there was no help

He was shown a familiar log of Ukpa woodThat passed him by while he called for helpHe knew not, that his prayers were answered 

He expected the kind of rescue, seen in movies

A chopper hovering with slings to pick him up

A submarine with expert divers to his clarion call

Or to have become a big fish and swam to safety

He did not help himself, so heavens picked him up

 II 

A starving man who lost his job for no cause of his

Had no money entirely and so he begged along

He starved with little or no food at all to eat in days

With debit card in hand, he went to an ATM for cash

He was referred, invalid, for it had nothing to give

 

The lady next on the queue brought him some cash

Thinking it was his own that the machine withheld

Shocked, he counted the bank notes, one to twenty

Then returned, because it was not what he wanted

He couldn’t be pushed to steal in his desperate state

 

When his friends heard his tempting story told

They laughed at him, called him, a father of fools

You said, you prayed to God before stepping out

That was the help you asked, but you did not see

He stopped a while and looked at them with dismay

 

With pains of biting hunger, was he really a fool

Like the drowning man and the log of wood at sea

Why didn’t he assist himself with the offer of cash

Put forward, in an error, by a naïve village woman

Lucky, she was, because she met the very wrong man









— t. reflexion, Dec 31, 2009

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Country/Region: NGA

Favorite Poets: Inspired by an article in an old manuscript , It reads:, AXIOMS OF PERFECTION, In the physical order – In the realization of the dream of beauty, In the moral order – In the realization of the dream of love, In the intellectual order – In the realization of dream of poetry, In the spiritual order – In the realization of the dream of the mystics

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t. reflexion

t. reflexion

16 years 4 months ago

Stories of faith...

Given the reaction by friends of the starving man, can a man and by extention, the society, be driven to steal or offend his or her moral values and for how long can he or she hold on in the face of engulfing decadence. Thank you for sparing time to read and best wishes. T.
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 4 months ago

I have no religious faith

But honesty, goodness and integrity are the values I live by. The first man was a fool. The second man lived by his integrity and was right. When starving, especially a family starving, any man can be forgiven anything. Cheers, Jess, reprehensibly irrepressible
t. reflexion

t. reflexion

16 years 3 months ago

Yes, 'own values'...

but it leaves a wide room for interpretations if there are no standards. Is it not ridiculous for a swindler to justify his crime by saying that the colonialists took what was not theirs in days his forebears, over one hundred and fifty years ago, therefore, if he swindles money from anybody who comes from the country of the colonialists, he has done a good job by making the innocent investor to pay back what may never have been stolen in the first place? In addition to standards, is morality. Conscience is the voice of the soul. A silent listener hears it and heed. Some call it, Gabriel. Thank you for your comments and time, best wishes. T.