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A DROWNING MAN
At the portals of heaven’s gate, in afterlife
We were told, he asked, why there was no help
He was shown a familiar log of Ukpa woodThat passed him by while he called for helpHe knew not, that his prayers were answeredHe expected the kind of rescue, seen in movies
A chopper hovering with slings to pick him up
A submarine with expert divers to his clarion call
Or to have become a big fish and swam to safety
He did not help himself, so heavens picked him up
IIA starving man who lost his job for no cause of his
Had no money entirely and so he begged along
He starved with little or no food at all to eat in days
With debit card in hand, he went to an ATM for cash
He was referred, invalid, for it had nothing to give
The lady next on the queue brought him some cash
Thinking it was his own that the machine withheld
Shocked, he counted the bank notes, one to twenty
Then returned, because it was not what he wanted
He couldn’t be pushed to steal in his desperate state
When his friends heard his tempting story told
They laughed at him, called him, a father of fools
You said, you prayed to God before stepping out
That was the help you asked, but you did not see
He stopped a while and looked at them with dismay
With pains of biting hunger, was he really a fool
Like the drowning man and the log of wood at sea
Why didn’t he assist himself with the offer of cash
Put forward, in an error, by a naïve village woman
Lucky, she was, because she met the very wrong man
Critiques
weirdelf
16 years 4 months ago
An inspiring re-telling of stories of faith, Trex.
t. reflexion
16 years 4 months ago
Stories of faith...
weirdelf
16 years 4 months ago
I have no religious faith
t. reflexion
16 years 4 months ago
Thank you
t. reflexion
16 years 3 months ago
Yes, 'own values'...