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adjei agyei-baah
Dec 29, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Rain tap on my roof

Rain, rain
Tap on my roof
Drip, drip
It drops to the ground
Small, small
It turns to a stream
And fast,fast
It races to the sea

Dedication:To Every child of the earth

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lyz

16 years 4 months ago

Dear Adj

And if it was not for that rain on the roof to the sea, a child would have no future. Wonderful and well written. Do you know, I honestly did not look at it this way. See how something so precious can be taken for granted, like I have just realized of myself. Well done and thank you, also thank you from the child inside. Love to all. Lyz. XX
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adjei agyei-baah

16 years 4 months ago

Dear Lyz

Many beauties in nature have remain unseen and hence untap.I think as humans it would pay to be nurtured by nature and sensitise by serenity. This what i have always been exploring to write about so that we may find it difficult to destroy our environment anytime we tempted.Hope the kids will love it and even rhyme it in school as you thanked me on their behalf. Do let me know anytime you mount a new poem.
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 4 months ago

excellent simplicity

this is the way to go on your way to meaningful complexity, Cheers, Jess, reprehensibly irrepressible