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washing tears
washing tears
Dec 30, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Undone

there's no, saving anything
it will all get swallowed in the sun

when i dream i dont see anything
its all just a blur of fire

what makes you think i would love to fall in love?
is this whole world comming undone?

there's no saving anyone
we all have to walk in the sun

well what makes you think i would love to fall in love?
my whole world is comming undone
— washing tears, Dec 30, 2009

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Region, Country: sandusky, ohio, USA

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Morgana Tragic…

16 years 4 months ago

Heya TearsLong time, no

Heya Tears Long time, no talk!! Like the feel of this one, just a few minor spelling mishaps and such. comming=coming and capitalize "I". On that note, a hint. Use punctuation and capitalization as you normally would. Makes the poem easier to read. But a good short read, I enjoyed. Peace