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Dec 28, 2009
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The Visitor
Man said it would last a thousand years
Not nearly enough to pay for the tears
From the Abyss of time I crawled my way up
Don't tell me now your kinda awe struck
Stupid people around and you listen to them!
What about me and my resolute wisdom?
Should I move on now or just tow the line?
You've treated me like shit and gave me no sign
To grab a hacksaw and cut off these wings
To think that I needed these bullshit things
This place you call Earth seems like home to me
Been three thousand years since I've been set free
Created without time or a way to be free
His ultimate faith the big fallacy
I gave it my all and never asked for what !
You dealt crooked truth and twisted my Lot
A warning to you that I'm no longer dead
My body does live with the words that you said
Speak to me now or hold your divine peace
The light of my way to halt and now cease
I'm leaving you here, alone on this earth
I'm off to my home, to my family of birth
I'd always said that I'd never come back
Origin I now go, no longer I lack
Not nearly enough to pay for the tears
From the Abyss of time I crawled my way up
Don't tell me now your kinda awe struck
Stupid people around and you listen to them!
What about me and my resolute wisdom?
Should I move on now or just tow the line?
You've treated me like shit and gave me no sign
To grab a hacksaw and cut off these wings
To think that I needed these bullshit things
This place you call Earth seems like home to me
Been three thousand years since I've been set free
Created without time or a way to be free
His ultimate faith the big fallacy
I gave it my all and never asked for what !
You dealt crooked truth and twisted my Lot
A warning to you that I'm no longer dead
My body does live with the words that you said
Speak to me now or hold your divine peace
The light of my way to halt and now cease
I'm leaving you here, alone on this earth
I'm off to my home, to my family of birth
I'd always said that I'd never come back
Origin I now go, no longer I lack
Comments
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
Dear Stuart
Stuart Reiss
16 years 4 months ago
I love nothing better than
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
A big ol’ YOUR WELCOME !!!
lyz
16 years 4 months ago
Dear Stuart
Stuart Reiss
16 years 4 months ago
The sweeetest Angel of
lyz
16 years 4 months ago
PS
Stuart Reiss
16 years 4 months ago
lol cool that was at my dads
reichley
16 years 4 months ago
Dear Stuart
Stuart Reiss
16 years 4 months ago
So glad this site exists and
seabhac
16 years 4 months ago
Hi Stuart
Stuart Reiss
16 years 4 months ago
Oh how I love to provoke