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Dec 29, 2009
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Wishful Thoughts
Fragrance of wild honeysuckle
teases me awake from dream
and I am imprisoned once again
in this aging shell of flesh
I rise gingerly from my bed
and stumble towards my morning's need
afterwards, sadly flushing away
the nectar imbibed in night's adventures
Gone is the dragon I slew,
the comrades I feasted with,
and the enchantress that embraced me
is but a fading vision of myopic eyes
What can this day grant me
that I did not glean threefold from sleep?
only weariness, tedium, and an
emptiness of soul too deep to fill
The waking world is true nightmare
slowly gnawing away one's will
and forcing once strong passion
into a dungeon of despair
My fevered prayer is only this,
to walk again beside a sea
where mermaids dance with fishes
and deeply breath of sweet, eternal youth
C. Lon R. Bruso
teases me awake from dream
and I am imprisoned once again
in this aging shell of flesh
I rise gingerly from my bed
and stumble towards my morning's need
afterwards, sadly flushing away
the nectar imbibed in night's adventures
Gone is the dragon I slew,
the comrades I feasted with,
and the enchantress that embraced me
is but a fading vision of myopic eyes
What can this day grant me
that I did not glean threefold from sleep?
only weariness, tedium, and an
emptiness of soul too deep to fill
The waking world is true nightmare
slowly gnawing away one's will
and forcing once strong passion
into a dungeon of despair
My fevered prayer is only this,
to walk again beside a sea
where mermaids dance with fishes
and deeply breath of sweet, eternal youth
C. Lon R. Bruso
— Lonnie, Dec 29, 2009
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Critiques
Ink Dragon
16 years 5 months ago
Dear Lonnie,
Lonnie
16 years 5 months ago
Thank you very much, Nina!
magics02
16 years 5 months ago
Tears from the sea
Lonnie
16 years 5 months ago
Thank you, Mona!
weirdelf
16 years 5 months ago
jeez mate, I have been here, in my darkest times.
poewriter58
16 years 5 months ago
Bear