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The Desert Breeze

Frosty footing
bellows out, at the grass blades
causing them to crunch, underfoot.

Should winter's ringing brisket of atmosphere
silently surrender to the blades,
an audible "bawl", might just be heard;

with the air I breathe
my lungs feel as if they've been freshly starched,
and with each step, my soul feels suddenly damper.

Stinging differences
from the tall days of the sun,
where each and everyone's heart began to perspire;

Spring and fall go virtually unnoticed,
as the desert wrestles patiently
with the climatic exchanges of the two polarities.

Gone now, are the mildly arid carresses of the winds of spring,
and painstakingly present, are the dark molecules
that freeze with abandon, the surface of the epidermis.

The desert breathes in cycles,
and learns to subtlely urge the body's comfort-zones
towards shade, during the heat.....and to seek shelter from winter's elements;

but I, however.....see the apex of the weather,
as it reaches for it's glory in it's severity...
and I understand it's commitment.....in reminding me, that I am.....home.
— docmaverick, Dec 29, 2009

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Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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anonymous1

16 years 5 months ago

The Desert Breeze

I enjoyed your poem. It put me in mind of Robert Frost. The way you describe the cold and being cold is effective: "lungs feel as if they've been freshly starched" and "dark molecules that freeze with abandon, the surface of the epidermis." I like how the desert "breathes" and "learns". And I like your appreciation for it. Thank you, Lisa
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 5 months ago

Why, thank-you Lisa....

...how very kind of you to say. This was really an excercise in writing as, I was trying to write about being "cold".....without using the word, "cold". Thanks again, for the feedback ! "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.