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Grandmothers and tricycles

Grandmothers, and tricycles,
Fly through the screened door
Not listening to the slam shut
The slow warn steps of floor
In places no longer then childhood
Standing back from the window ledge

The hard coal-bin morning of huddled brothers gone away
Remembering black ;shoveled  to the red hot sparking flame
The creaky grate closing below the warm steam of musky days--
Mittens ;one left behind the dresser you find on moving day after goodbyes
The key you leave on the ring long after the lock is gone
Because you treasure the smooth feel of so many memories
Like chrome polished till the brass reveals itself

That little thing you left in the attic; lost in its uselessness you needed
You find the little treasure of your past ;dusty in the forgotten corner
Passed on to a time you don't use anymore

The trail of you follows the unmoved grass
Your bare tickled feet calloused hard, and bee-stung
Rolling  the oats; between worlds delinquent hours
Running home through the tight deep clover
Over the hill ; pulling your sisters hair because it's real
screaming, shoving, jostling your way from being small 
Wrestling your way into manhood
Then beyond.
— Orphani, Dec 28, 2009

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lyz

16 years 5 months ago

The Same all over The world

Thanks for the memories with this amazing step back in time poem. For me any how. I lived with my nan and those tricycles, I still have one and a little dinky. lol. Both in bad condition, rust wise. I really enjoyed reading this. A classic uplifter. You have a gift dear Barry. And manhood, well, you turned out okay. Love Lyz. XX PS, you shouldnt pull sisters hair, lol.
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Orphani

16 years 5 months ago

Thanks for stopping and

Thanks for stopping and taking the time to comment Lyz. I can just see you on that trycycle now flying around the landscape. Ya but mine had a bell.Dinky?Whats a dinky? Time goes by so fast I wanted to see if I could capture A bit of that feeling.Oil yours up and i'll race you weeeeeee. B
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lyz

16 years 5 months ago

I am smiling

I keep forgetting that we are seas apart. A three wheeled tricycle is a medium sized, a penny farthing is a big wheel front one or two wheels back, and a dinky is one wheel front, 2 at back but they are all same size and are a very small version, plus Dinky is an old brand name in toys, not sure if they made anything else but tin trucks cars etc, all tin. When we get the other comp up and running I will get Jade to send a pic of both to you, and no, I wont be on either. Lol. Love Lyz. XX
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Orphani

16 years 5 months ago

I see you stayed late at the

I see you stayed late at the party your leaning a little to the left. Sober up theres poetry to write and worlds to conquer within and without , B
Ravenshakti

Ravenshakti

16 years 5 months ago

Hello Barry...

This lovely poem will touch many hearts... It did mine... I love to read poems that are not only well written, but that nestle in the heart, instead of momentarily visiting the mind; and then slip away. This one... stays. Beautiful and beautifully done. Happy New Year! Raven
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Orphani

16 years 5 months ago

You have touch a point in my

You have touched a point in my heart.I love Robert Frost; the poetry and the man. The thing he said, that I can never forget, that is always close in my thoughts is this:"All I want is to write a few poems that can't be gotten rid of easily". .To do this ; at least for me;takes a lot of hard work and the inalterable desire to make that a reality.Becouse in the end, wheather they are ever given a place next to such great works by other men or consigned to the dusty forgotten shelves of time ;they will have accomplished my task; to know the hearts of such men, and the depths of their dreams. Thank you for the kind words.
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pinksheep

16 years 5 months ago

Rolling

the oats; between the worlds delinquent hours-this is poet laureate stuff mate, to be frightfully exacting , my regards-
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Orphani

16 years 5 months ago

My warm thanks for your most

My warm thanks for your most generous compliment. I am only a babe in the performance of this most beautiful art form. There are many layers to removee to stand naked before the stark light of the naked self and then to find the words. I glanced your work, and I see a bit of intrgue there.Many thanks again and hope to visit. Barry ,,,o,,