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Dec 28, 2009
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Grandmothers and tricycles
Grandmothers, and tricycles,
Fly through the screened door
Not listening to the slam shut
The slow warn steps of floor
In places no longer then childhood
Standing back from the window ledge
The hard coal-bin morning of huddled brothers gone away
Remembering black ;shoveled to the red hot sparking flame
The creaky grate closing below the warm steam of musky days--
Mittens ;one left behind the dresser you find on moving day after goodbyes
The key you leave on the ring long after the lock is gone
Because you treasure the smooth feel of so many memories
Like chrome polished till the brass reveals itself
That little thing you left in the attic; lost in its uselessness you needed
You find the little treasure of your past ;dusty in the forgotten corner
Passed on to a time you don't use anymore
The trail of you follows the unmoved grass
Your bare tickled feet calloused hard, and bee-stung
Rolling the oats; between worlds delinquent hours
Running home through the tight deep clover
Over the hill ; pulling your sisters hair because it's real
screaming, shoving, jostling your way from being small
Wrestling your way into manhood
Then beyond.
Fly through the screened door
Not listening to the slam shut
The slow warn steps of floor
In places no longer then childhood
Standing back from the window ledge
The hard coal-bin morning of huddled brothers gone away
Remembering black ;shoveled to the red hot sparking flame
The creaky grate closing below the warm steam of musky days--
Mittens ;one left behind the dresser you find on moving day after goodbyes
The key you leave on the ring long after the lock is gone
Because you treasure the smooth feel of so many memories
Like chrome polished till the brass reveals itself
That little thing you left in the attic; lost in its uselessness you needed
You find the little treasure of your past ;dusty in the forgotten corner
Passed on to a time you don't use anymore
The trail of you follows the unmoved grass
Your bare tickled feet calloused hard, and bee-stung
Rolling the oats; between worlds delinquent hours
Running home through the tight deep clover
Over the hill ; pulling your sisters hair because it's real
screaming, shoving, jostling your way from being small
Wrestling your way into manhood
Then beyond.
— Orphani, Dec 28, 2009
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lyz
16 years 5 months ago
The Same all over The world
Orphani
16 years 5 months ago
Thanks for stopping and
lyz
16 years 5 months ago
I am smiling
Bonitaj
16 years 5 months ago
What a lovely piece of nostalgia
Orphani
16 years 5 months ago
I see you stayed late at the
Ravenshakti
16 years 5 months ago
Hello Barry...
Orphani
16 years 5 months ago
You have touch a point in my
pinksheep
16 years 5 months ago
Rolling
Orphani
16 years 5 months ago
My warm thanks for your most