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But no-one answered (1972)

Three times I knocked…

 

I was the unforgiving child, cast out into the coldest night.
I was the beggar, lying on calloused belly, just one crystal tear.
I was Jesus bleeding at the sight of nails.
I was Paradise dragging its broken wing.
I was the flowing robes of justice in passing.
I was the Isaac Sacrifice seeking an altar stone
I was withered breasts sucking innocence and ignorance.
I was the Virgin giving birth to Man who beshit himself for being
just a man.
I was Sunlight jiggling in the pockets of Youth.
I was Herbert’s turtle, foaming at the mouth.

Three times I knocked..

I was the gift of recognition from an endless ocean full of faces.
I was Vicissitudes, the eighth deadly sin.
I was the voice of reason falling silently on the land.
I was the truth that is not the only truth
I was the rain inside your glasses.
I was the obstruction from your greatness, I was the pimple
on your ass.
I was freedom quietly leaving by the servant’s entrance.
I was the lead in your heart that almost crushed you.\
I was the deathplug in the cosmic drain.
I was the wildflower you held too tightly.

Three times I knocked…

 Once,

I was the messenger of surrender.

Twice,

I am bored to tears,
What remains after the striptease?

Three times,

I am the Promise:

This year I will not buy Salt from the Merchants of Sodom and Gomorrah.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


 
— Kailashana, Dec 28, 2009

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lyz

16 years 5 months ago

I will answer, the best I can, lol.

Serious, funny, sad and quite entertaining. Hate to hear you are bored but I hope writing this took your boredom away. I really enjoyed your poem. Rant or not, well written. Love Lyz, now cheer up. XX
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 5 months ago

1972-present…………..the

1972-present..............the longest boredom-rant in history, n'est-ce pas? LOL!!! Cheering up is a loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong process. Alas, I'm succccccccccccccch a drama queen. ;-) ~A
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lyz

16 years 5 months ago

Shit

Sorry to have missed that. 1972. I was too wrapped up in reading. Sorry. Lol. You poor girl, as for drama queen, well, aren't we all, lol. I hope the boredom hasn't lasted this long. Take care and make this year yours. Love to you all, Lyz. XX
Seren

Seren

16 years 5 months ago

Dear Mum

You have become a flow of words to eternal truths ... poignant ... and heartbreaking this one these are my favourite lines ... I was freedom quietly leaving by the servant’s entrance. I was the lead in your heart that almost crushed you and this is how i feel ... Love you biggest hugs Jayne x x
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 5 months ago

Sometimes it’s wayyyy too

Sometimes it's wayyyy too heavy to laugh. 'nite 'nite. luv, mum p.s. love your picture! Don’t let your victories go to your head, or your failures go to your heart.
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flowing reed

16 years 5 months ago

Defeat - oh no!

Feeling slighted, unnoticed and angry with this world? I feel the same way too. How to get back to a happy, jolly condition without hurting anybody even your enemies is to joke, to be funny and entertaining. You are a good poet. Opme.
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Amethyst

16 years 5 months ago

perfection

..and thank you peace Sofie
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orgami

16 years 5 months ago

from the gunsights of gunships

blades slashing air their pocksucking wallop common as adrenalin heartbeats as common as plastic toys on soldier boys and soldier boys taunting full auto in hot isreali sunshine girls skipping rope and laughing and laundry hanging on the line a dog doesnt jump when a mortar round crumples haze hangs in the air like the blue of jesus's eyes american painter plastic grocery bag with supplies cigarettes and humus water bottles fish food the angels soar with bulletpfoof visions and bruised arms there is sandbags at the gates of heaven and St Peter is on Sick Leave a child waters flowers your poem made me write this Your poem is beautiful thank You
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CyberSpace

16 years 5 months ago

it feels like beating my

it feels like beating my chest long after the event but I remember feeling like this till someone found me and picked me up love Snake xoxoxoxox