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But no-one answered (1972)
Three times I knocked…
I was the unforgiving child, cast out into the coldest night.
I was the beggar, lying on calloused belly, just one crystal tear.
I was Jesus bleeding at the sight of nails.
I was Paradise dragging its broken wing.
I was the flowing robes of justice in passing.
I was the Isaac Sacrifice seeking an altar stone
I was withered breasts sucking innocence and ignorance.
I was the Virgin giving birth to Man who beshit himself for being
just a man.
I was Sunlight jiggling in the pockets of Youth.
I was Herbert’s turtle, foaming at the mouth.
Three times I knocked..
I was the gift of recognition from an endless ocean full of faces.
I was Vicissitudes, the eighth deadly sin.
I was the voice of reason falling silently on the land.
I was the truth that is not the only truth
I was the rain inside your glasses.
I was the obstruction from your greatness, I was the pimple
on your ass.
I was freedom quietly leaving by the servant’s entrance.
I was the lead in your heart that almost crushed you.\
I was the deathplug in the cosmic drain.
I was the wildflower you held too tightly.
Three times I knocked…
Once,
I was the messenger of surrender.
Twice,
I am bored to tears,
What remains after the striptease?
Three times,
I am the Promise:
This year I will not buy Salt from the Merchants of Sodom and Gomorrah.
Critiques
lyz
16 years 5 months ago
I will answer, the best I can, lol.
Kailashana
16 years 5 months ago
1972-present…………..the
lyz
16 years 5 months ago
Shit
Seren
16 years 5 months ago
Dear Mum
Kailashana
16 years 5 months ago
Sometimes it’s wayyyy too
flowing reed
16 years 5 months ago
Defeat - oh no!
Amethyst
16 years 5 months ago
perfection
orgami
16 years 5 months ago
from the gunsights of gunships
CyberSpace
16 years 5 months ago
it feels like beating my