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Scattered Notes on the Scale of Life

Ever, so carefully I'm watching my step
so as not, to bruise the music,
that is within you.

What a symphony I hear
whenever you allow my ear
to gently greet your voice.

The cadence that you use
along with your way of phrasing,
always seems to be different;

and your syncapated-staccato
is your underlying mood, as it were
or the rythm, which combines to keep the song, "fresh".

I'm so elated
that you would invite me to join you in a duet,
at this particular time of your life;

and I  will learn all of the words,
and I promise to study all of the harmonies,
and search for the sweetest of melodies,

so, as to accompany you, correctly.
Also, I will keep a watchful eye out
for music traps, where errors can take place.

Causing some to believe in the theory
that if a sour note is hit, deliberately hit it again, in a measure,
and it's no longer an accident...or a mistake.

The problem with such a theory is that, the music's completely ruined, afterwards;
so, I'll watch out for that sort of thing,
as well as be watching you.....and what you'll be singing, next.

— docmaverick, Dec 28, 2009

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Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Critiques

Seren

Seren

16 years 5 months ago

Awwww Doc your speaking to

Awwww Doc your speaking to my heart now .. there is nothing more uplifting or connecting as singing and being 'one' with someone ... music for my eyes and soul this poem magnificent you put into words how I have felt so many times in my life love and hugs Jayne x x
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 5 months ago

Awww Jayne....

...who seems to never sleep; thanks for identifying with me, on this one. There's nothing much better, than "making beautiful music", with someone else ! Thanks, for the kind vowels, and consonants. I hear your tune, as well. "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.
Seren

Seren

16 years 5 months ago

Pssssst its 5am here and I

Pssssst its 5am here and I never sleep more than four or five hours a night ,so your right I dont sleep much lol ;) love and hugs Jayne x x
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lyz

16 years 5 months ago

Dear Doc

Music soothes the savage beast, it makes our hearts dance, puts lovers in the mood. I can not see you ever stepping on and bruising the music. Your words in this poem shows that music is a part of you. I thoroughly enjoyed this duet, and may the sweet sounds and song linger long in your heart. Well written. Love Lyz. XX
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magics02

16 years 5 months ago

Brilliant

I also enjoyed this poem immensely. As I am from a musician family every beat and every tune I love and feel. I am working on buying my first baby grand piano and learning to really play it once and for all. I feel music and poetry as an art, a gift, a beautiful song.. Great piece of work here doc! Ms Mona
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 5 months ago

Thank-you, Ms Mona....

...for the very generous wordage. Im genuinely pleased that you felt the "music", too. "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.
AW

Antoinette Mar…

16 years 5 months ago

You have "tuned" up ....

my heart once again to the tune of contentment...thanks Doc......Antoinette Mari
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 5 months ago

And I, Antoinette....

...truly appreciate your thoughts, on this one. Thanks, for the encouragement ! I am posting a poem that I wrote, for my Mother...whom you remind me of. See if you like it, too. "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 5 months ago

Seabhac....

...I sincerely thank you for the words of encouragement. Thanks for reading, and I REALLY appreciate your taking the time to comment, as well. "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.